Aluna Chausiku remembered driving home after working another double shift, trying to stay awake and in her lane, while passing a truck and trailer.
She woke up in a potato field. There was no road, no car, and no truck. The sky was a cloudless bright blue. She decided she must be dreaming. She had always had vivid dreams, but this ...
There was no other explanation for her being naked and furry. Her arms were abnormally long and she didn’t have enough fingers. Why did she have giant curved claws?
Too much work and too many double shifts. Too long since she had gotten a full night’s sleep. She was still tired. So. Very. Tired!
She yawned as she lay down and curled up in the middle of the field.
She dreamed of a local farmer finding her. He was some kind of mouse, or rat, with large round black ears. When he couldn’t wake her up, he called some guards. When the guards couldn’t wake her, they escalated to screaming, hitting, and kicking. Eventually, they they gave up and carried her to a temple of healing in a nearby city.
She dreamed of nightfall and daybreak. Of the sun setting again and rising. The earth spun as the days drifted by, timeless in the dream.
She didn’t feel hungry or thirsty, just tired. Even in the dream she felt tired.
The city still existed in her dreamscape, and she dreamed that every morning a few of the city residents, mostly mice, rats, and foxes, didn’t wake. They were carried to the temple and placed beside her.
The priests did what they could to combat the sleeping sickness. The fed the fallen and turned them occasionally to avoid bed sores. Small amounts of water and food were swallowed by the sleepers. Healing spells were cast as needed, but no one woke from the dreams.
She found she could change her focus within the dream. To shift her attention around the city, to watch the residents as they continued their lives. She watched as they began to fear their home, fear for their lives.
The residents tried to remove some the sleepers as they fled the city, but if one was carried outside of the city limits, they went into convulsions. If they weren’t returned within a few hours, they died.
Time passed and the sleepers grew gaunt, as if they weren’t getting enough sustenance, no matter how much food and water was given. Help from surrounding territories was requested. More healers were sent, but no cure was found.
The living residents that didn’t have sleeping relatives left the area first. Then the surviving families abandoned their sleeping children, their sleeping spouses and parents.
The town was cursed. Signs were posted to stay away.
Aluna wondered at the meaning as the city within her lucid dream slowly emptied.
Thanks for the chapter! And we have all of them too! It will be so fun
TFTC
There is a hint of depression, but it is more the depression of work, trying to sleep and having no time or motivation for any other aspect of life other than eat, sleep, work So more drudgery than anything else.
Still a sleeping curse/aura with no end except death is a pretty horrible fate.
Some of the other isekaied characters were horrible people, like Matt and Mikhail (both M names, I wonder if I did that subconsciously).
Aluna was just overworked and happy to get some nap time.
@atomically Kind of sounds like you may have had a "Matt" in your life, sorry mostly joking. I can definitely understand the overworked and wanting some nap time just not the sharing of nap time with others around her.
Depression makes a better foe.
That's what I thought at first, but someone I trust expressed concern about using mental health issues like depression as a metaphor or reason behind the antagonist's actions.
There's a fine line between having depression as an external force that can be fought against and painting anyone who doesn't as lazy/slothful. I'm not a good enough writer to toe that line.
@atomically reframe: sloth as a symptom of depression. Or sloth as a consequence of lack of interest. Sloth for sloth sake, I don't see going anywhere in your plot.
@Tsuno One of the early criticisms I received about the antagonists is that the two women weren't 'evil', but were both overworked and forced into that position due to circumstantial issues. I reworked both of them slightly based on that feedback.
I've discussed this to some extent on patreon, but I'm a mess there and it's probably not worth joining just to read my excuses and whining about how hard writing is. Here are a couple quick notes:
Each of the antagonists has a sin-based aura and a method of acquiring power. I tried to touch lightly on each of those in the interludes, but some are more obvious than others.
Bonny has both lust and wrath now. She can drain the life from anyone aroused, but it's easier if she's actively kissing or touching them. She hasn't used her fury aura to control or claim power yet, but she'll get there.
Aluna can cause/increase drowsiness and steal power from anyone sleeping near her. She'll be one of the final bosses and will have a lot of time to build and adapt her power set before Bonny confronts her.
@atomically there is much I could say -- in any direction. Whether you would appreciate my chatter is orthogonal to the supply. The top level TLDR is my speculation that you are making assumptions which you allow to restrict and direct the premise and motive of your story regardless of plot. As long as you are aware of your assumptions, it becomes choice rather than lost opportunity.
I appreciate any conversation. :) Maybe we should take it to DMs or discord rather than post more spoilers here though.