Ben opened his eyes and blinked. He was lying on a raft, surrounded by blue water. The sun was shining brightly, and the waves were gently lapping against the sides of the raft.
Ben sat up and looked around. He didn't recognise anything. He had no idea where he was. The water was clear, and he could see fish swimming below. He reached down and scooped up a handful of water. It was salty. He spat the water out.
He took a deep breath and looked around again. He was still confused, but he was starting to feel better. He was alive, and he was in a beautiful place.
Ben decided to explore. He climbed off the raft and waded into the water. The water was warm and inviting, and he felt himself relaxing. He swam for a while, enjoying the feeling of the sun on his skin and the water in his hair.
After a while, Ben swam back to the raft and climbed aboard. He sat down and looked out at the horizon. He didn't know where he was going, but he was excited to find out.
He took a deep breath and started to row. He didn't know where he was going, but he was determined to find out.
Author Note:
System = []
Ben talking to the system = ()
[Hello]
(Who is this and why are you in my head?)
[I am your gift.]
(My system)
[Yes, we are here to build a harem and get the One Piece]
(Harem? One piece? I thought the Goddess Athena is the greek god of wisdom. This does not sound like being a hero or saving the world)
[Getting a harem and getting the One piece will save the world]
(.......)
[I will explain more later, just get your harem first. In order to help you with that, I will be giving quests and unique items to help you out.]
(Wait, you need to explain more, why harem, what quest and what unique items)
[Quest: Gain your first lover.
Description: In order for you to save the world you must gain a loyal following so get going.
Reward: Random Logia Devil ]
Something is wrong here for sure, Ben thought.
As Ben started rowing, he thought about his life back home. He had been a normal guy, going to school and a normal life. He missed his mom and sister. But now, he was in a whole new world. A world of pirates and adventure and this system.
Ben smiled. He couldn't wait to see what the future held.
Reward: Random Logia Devil ]
my man gonna get an actual devil instead of a fruit.
Ben opened his eyes and blinked. He was lying on a raft, surrounded by blue water. The sun was shining brightly, and the waves were gently lapping against the sides of the raft.
Ben untied the raft. He took a deep breath and started to row. He didn't know where he was going, but he was determined to find out.
Where did he untie it from? Had he tied a knot in the water?
Thanks for the feedback. This was missing a bit of extra description. I will add more details in the future and take care of such details.
help you would that, I will be giving quest and unique items
Should be "with" not "would", and should be "quests".
Thanks updated!
What the... untied? From?
Seeing by other comments you haven't bothered yet by changing this huh. Will I have to deal with more of that...
Hi, Re-reading the chapter and future chapter that sentence actually does not make sense. He cannot tie it to the water. I have deleted it.
Yeah there is no description of the area he wakes up at. Aside from a raft in water we know nothing. Is he in a river? The ocean? Where did he untie the raft from? A dock? A tree? Very vague setting.
The future chapters should develop the setting a bit more however I will be more clear.