
Death and Life
My name is Hana. A humble librarian, I lived thirty-three years alone—no family, no friends, no one to grieve my absence when the time came.
I was working, just like any other day, when it happened. The earth trembled beneath me. A deafening roar split the air as the city around me cracked and crumbled. Buildings collapsed, their shattered pieces raining down like deadly confetti. The ground split open, a yawning abyss, swallowing everything in its path. And then… fire. So much fire. It spread like a living thing, devouring everything in its wake, a hunger I couldn’t escape. I tried to run, but there was nowhere to go. The streets were blocked, the air thick with choking smoke. My lungs burned, filling with the sting of ash and ember. The flames crept toward me, inevitable, relentless. I screamed, but no sound came. It didn’t matter. My flesh, my will—they were nothing to the fire. I was consumed.
The next thing I remember is… nothing. Darkness. I floated in an endless void of pure blackness, weightless and silent. I couldn’t move, couldn’t see, couldn’t feel. Time didn’t exist here. Was it minutes? Hours? Eternities? I had no way of knowing. Was I dead? Had I survived, only to be trapped in some hollow existence, my broken body lost in a void with no one to mourn me?
The more I thought about it, the more my mind began to spiral. My body felt… heavy. Like something was pressing down on me, holding me in place. I strained against it, and then—something changed. I could move. The sensation was subtle at first, but it was there. After what felt like an eternity of numbness, the simple act of movement was a strange comfort.
I shifted again, feeling the weight of my body, the stiffness in my limbs. But something was wrong. I could no longer feel the soft bed I had imagined I’d been lying on. Where was I? What was happening?
I jerked again, this time with more urgency, more desperation. And then—crack. A sharp, sudden sound. Something… had broken.
My body itched. Not just an ordinary itch. It was as if my skin was alive, demanding something from me. It felt like… instinct. My muscles tensed as I struggled against whatever held me, each movement causing the sensation to intensify. I had to break free. Had to escape.
The pressure built until I couldn’t take it anymore. I swung harder, faster, until—
CRACK—CRACK—
C-
And then, I was free. I gasped. Air. Real, fresh air. I could breathe again, move again. But something was wrong. My body felt alien, foreign. My arms—there were four of them. Four. When had that happened?
I blinked, trying to clear my vision, but it was distorted, overwhelming. My senses were heightened, but everything felt… off. I could see more, but differently. The world around me was both clearer and more confusing. What was going on? This… this couldn’t be real. Was I still dreaming? Had I died and ended up in some twisted nightmare?
I lay there, trying to make sense of it all. Time passed—how much, I couldn’t say. My body, weak and trembling, felt the gnawing hunger. That gnawing… I hadn’t felt it in what felt like forever. It was real. This was real. I wasn’t dreaming.
Could it be? Could this be the so-called “Isekai” everyone talked about? The fantasy world where people are reincarnated with powers? I had no memory of anything before. No memories of a family, no past, no real connection. But now, here I was.
I gritted my teeth. If I was in an Isekai, I had to have some kind of power, right? That’s what the stories said. The protagonist always had something extraordinary, something hidden, something stolen. But how would I know what I had?
“Status?”
A flicker of hope, a spark of curiosity, led me to speak. The words barely left my lips before the screen appeared before my eyes.
| [Status] | ||
| Name:N/A | Species: Solitary honeybee | |
| Level: 1 | Class: Queen | Mana: N/D |
| Life: 3 | Str: 0.2 | Def: 0.1 |
| Spr: 1.3 | Int: 15 | Wis: 5 |
| [Skills] |
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{Wax making} lv 1 Use plant material to create wax that can be used for various purposes. |
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{Create Honey} lv 1 Create honey from flower nectar. |
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{Maternal Connection} - locked You can command and impose your own will on your offspring |
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{Egg laying} Lv 1 Make your offspring with your body nutrients. [Laying options] - Work bee Lv1 - Soldier Bee lv1 |
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{Memorial Memory} Lv1 |
| [Traits] |
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{Wise} You have accumulated a lot of knowledge throughout your life Intelligence +20% Wisdom+30% |
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{Fear of burning} Life -25% Fire Defence -85% |
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{Conserned player} Wisdom -75% Speed -5 |
Weeeell... that's something to start with, I guess?





Stupid river of souls, unable to extinguish fear of fire.
You'd think the system would help ease trauma instead of branding it on your soul
This is actually better most systems novels tend to baby the Mc so much so there is basically no character development a system is suppose to assist not babysit after all if the Mc stays the same for whole time of the novel it will get boring
I don't think that was the System just telling her.
Make your offspring with our body nutrients.
"your"
{Conserned player}
"Concerned"
wveryone
should be "everyone"
Oh well, that's a new concept, an insect isekai, but seems promising. If I can give some tips : - the start is a little rushed, there is info not needed (age and profession). The "isekai = cheat" is confusing, at least, when she spawn, make it like automatically open for the first time. Also, I know human can adapt extremely fast, but there is to much surprise followed by acceptance after dying in a traumatising manner. More on the practical side, there can be "title" who is a sort of achievement, bu also "trait" and there you can place the fear of fire. Something who ruins a little the world is that she is not expecting anything else than to be a monster, that it is a magical word when there is LITERALLY no info. She should be extremely confused
(buuuuut if she has the system who open automatically, she can start to understand). If someday you woke up in a strange way, did you say "MAGIC IS REAL"?
You can use the T.T.E (trial/test/error)for thé MC.And last, she is a damn young librarian, she should like books and read a lot ! Why is she talking like she is 70 years old about isekai ? (The part with cheat power is ruining a little). Anyway, the story picked my interest, and I will continue to observe how it goes 
. Don't get shy about your writing, it's hard to be fluid at start, but it will come. Best of luck in this work and tftc !
Wow I never wrote this much
Thanks for the tips and criticism too! I also felt that it could be a little too fast at the beginning and that she was too "cool" with the situation, but I intend to explore this more in the next chapters, and the way she speaks like a lady is on purpose! my idea of a character is a girl in her 30s who had no family or friends, someone who saw the world in a negative way and was grumpy
@Baeon Okay ! I'm sure your style will be polished as chapters goes.
Insect Isekai is not a new concept and there are good insect Isekai stories out there that have gone on for years , also why the hell should she sound young???
She 33 and a librarian with no family , friends or relatives , ofc she is gonna sound old due to all the books she's read and the loneliness she probably experienced
@Gamingwithrad I wanted to convey the vibe of an anti-social woman - by choice, who talks a lot of sh*t when she's alone. Something like some real adults do in real life, because someone being anti-social doesn't necessarily mean they don't know how to talk to people, they just might prefer not to talk to anyone or simply don't like talking to other people, that's what I had in mind when creating MC.
She knows how to be polite and respectful when talking to someone, but she's the type that if someone bumped into her on the street she would say something like: "Oh, it's okay!" and walk away, but would be thinking in her head something like: "You f*cking son of a bit*h, are you blind or what? Do I need to put a Christmas tree on my head so you can see me clearly?"
@Baeon I'm gonna be honest I did not expect the putting a Christmas tree of my head thing , but kudos to you for the creativity of that insult , anyway since you're here already I wanna ask why do you not edit the chapters with the corrections in the comment section?
@Baeon I've heard of that Insult Before
@Spacerunner357 The version of a watermelon on the head is more common.
@Baeon Hu I see.:) thanks