The Story is very interesting, but I don't like that we only see the certain parts of the story.

An Example is when he calls a merchant over so that he can manipulate him to help him. He cuts his hand off chapter ends, and we move on without mentioning it, he comes back 2 chapters later being a loyal follower the development of characters is missing. Many of them are very 1deminsional, like the butler who is OP but then dies because of a sickness. The only reason he was in the story was so that the MC has a grace period after spawn. There is no explanation about him. But if you can see past these flaws, the Idea of the Story is interesting.

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Its quite good and I like how MC is decisive and doesn't waste his time for useless double thinking and monologues its just started and I also liked synopsis author is on point person who doesn't like wasting time on useless details like weather environment etc until it is not important this kind of writing is what I like 

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I want to state that I am angry that this story is essentially the same after it was taken down and now reposted. I like the story but if you read it before don't bother rereading it.

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