There is a lot to say about this and none are particularly good. Everything about it is half-assed, not even barely finished but more so that it wasn't thought out. The pacing is way too fast, nothing is explained, the background is non-existent, world building doesn't exist, etc... It is supposed to be about the MC reincarnating into a korean style romance novel but no information about is given aside from the name which only appeared once. The power system was never explained, no background aside from 4 lines about the MC's mother (genuinely don't know the relationships as they are only explained in one paragraph), and I could go on but I genuinely don't remember much even though I read it less than thirty minutes ago.

If there is any part of a story/novel you can critique then you can safely say that it was half assed in this. 

I said this before but it doesn't feel like not quite there or that it is missing anything but instead that it wasn't even intended to be anything more. It is somehow only partly done yet completely finished. So much of a story is missing but the are no signs of them missing. All of this is meant in a negative way.

 If I had to give it a star rating then it would be about 2/10 stars. 

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