As a young Peter Quill slowly starves to death in a prison cell on Yondu’s Ravager ship, another soul appears and merges with his body, causing the two souls to mix and become one.
A child who lost his mother to cancer and was abducted by space pirates in the very same night…
A middle-aged man from another universe with all sorts of future knowledge packed into his head…
Both trapped in a much darker version of the MCU. Oh! And it’s Star Wars as well!
Male Lead/Main Character: Peter Quill or Star-Lord.
Female Lead/Love Interest(s): ????? (A/N: I was thinking of having two partners for Peter since Star-Lord is known to be promiscuous, but we’ll see. IDK yet.)
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It's an average Scribble Hub power fantasy with a few interesting things haphazardly mixed in. And Star Wars and Marvel as mixed don't mix well.
The grammar is Good: minimum mistakes (only one I found in 10 chapters).
The writing style is good but not unique. I couldn't find any faults but was not hooked either.
Feels like the Author is rushing things. No effort for the MC to earn his power. He gets to know Tutanimis and other very complicated skills in one chapter and learns them in the next one. This shows a lack of effort, no mechanics or limitations.
At this point he'll be the supreme lord of the universe or equivalent before 20. Marvel and Star Wars both have characters past 20 as main players no need to make the MC overpower them while being still too young. Anakin was mid his mid-20s during Clone Wars and Obi-wan early 30's. Luke and Leia were well into their early 20's in the Original Trilogy. Tony Stark was mid 40's in Iron Man (2007). If MC is to be in this playing field then he has to at least be old enough or it will look a bit condescending (maybe not the best word choice but I can't explain it very well it's 3 AM right now). :)
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One of the cringiest fanfics I've ever read. It's like morty wrote this.
It's a power fantasy where nothing goes wrong for the MC. Might as well be slice of life, meet and greet with characters from marvel and star wars.
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I love this AU! There are so many unique changes to canon, from both Marvel and Star Wars, that almost everything is new and fresh. There are tons of characters that behave out of character, but in good ways!
I don't think I've ever read a Marvel fic that didn't at least mention the existence of the Infinity Stones, but I'm liking the idea of a Marvel plot that isn't centered around the stones. Curious to see how the plots evolve without the wish-granting MacGuffins to draw in all of the central characters of the Infinity War Saga.
Any story from AlienWarlord is bound to be entertaining. Can't wait for more chapters!
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It's a pretty confusing mess of different intellectual properties, which all clash with each other while also not really being displayed more than skin deep. It constantly swings between being too slow and too fast, with passages where some details would help in world building just rambled through.
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Only 2 reviews? Lets fix that.
I have to say, this Book is full of interesting characters and development for the world, successfully integrating the Universe of Star wars and the MCU.
And the pace and quality at which the chapters come out, I am looking forward to reading a new chapter, maybe two, every single day.
The Author has put tonnes of effort in and it shows, So I whole-heartedly encourage you to read this book.
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