A man dies, and wakes up transmigrated in a new world with an incredibly confusing and convoluted system, absolutely no knowledge of anything, and generally has to stumble his way through, making mistakes and learning from them as he discovers, fights, flirts, and various other f-words his way through problems.
Additional Tags: Incomprehensible System, Eldritch Horror, Cats? Cats.
A/N: This fic will have Smut, a lot of it in fact, but it won't have it until AFTER the romance, which won't happen until after a fair amount of plot progression. We're doing a bit of everything here. There will be multiple POVs, see the A/N on chapter 4 for more of an explanation. There will not be a Patreon, at least there isn't one planned. There will be TWs, but not for Gore or physical abuse, those are covered by CWs. R-18 Chapters will have a *.
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All Rights Reserved- Ongoing - Updated 14 hours ago
- 48 reading
- 10 plan to read
- 1 completed
- 1 paused
- 5 dropped
This novel got a lot of potential.
World building: 10/10
I really like the way the author approached the explanation of how the world is and works it did not feel like an info dump or anything, it just felt like the MC was genuinely trying to understand the world like a curious child.
Characters: ?/10
So far nothing wrong with them, but it's too early to judge how good they are, I don't have any major problems with the way they're written or anything like that, it's simply too early for me to say.
Dialogue: 9/10
It doesn't feel forced or anything like that, I kinda know who is who from the way they talk, it doesn't get confusing and even while the dialogue exposes information about the world it's in a natural way.
Plot: ?/10
So far I can't really judge the plot, but that's mostly because the protagonist is still trying to understand how things work.
Combat: 10/10
Surprising good, when it comes to Lit RPG combat tends to be something like "I swung the sword, and it dies" but the combat here feels good fluid even, and it's not like the protagonist is immediately an expert or anything like that we see him learn and try to understand how it all works so he can kill thing more efficiently.
MC: 10/10
The best word to describe him would be Curious, that is his biggest quality and in a way flaw, not that in a bad way he is always trying to learn how things work even being a bit reckless but that just adds personality to the protagonist, he doesn't fell like the generic isekai dense nice average japanese guy that you can find in any generic novel with a stupidly long name.
I may edit this review later after a while but so far this was a pretty enjoyable novel.
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