An older Harry Potter dies after experiencing much hardship and defeating his worst enemy before being reincarnated in an alternate version of his world where his parents are alive and he is no longer the Chosen One.
Now he used all his accumulated knowledge and skills to protect those important to him and defeat Voldemort once more.
The upload rate is currently at 6 chapters per week, I may increase it in the future if I have more time. I do not have specific days or times for the uploads because my full-time job has an erratic schedule so I upload whenever I have the time. But you can expect 5 new chapters by the end of the week. Sorry for the inconvenience, I hope my readers understand.
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A.N -
- No harem
- There will be a lot of violence, so be warned.
- The pacing will not be too fast, this is going to be estimated at around 400 chapters.
So this fic is really overrated at 4.5/5 stars.
Grammar 5/10 : Not very good. Constantly uses uppercase "He" when its not even the beginning of a sentence and constantly using "is" instead of "it's". There are few other minor mistakes as well
Story 4/10: Really generic. I dont know why people are calling it unique, but its really generic and many things feel really forced. (Generic time travel into past to save the world again).
Character 4/10: Like this HP doesn't really have much defining personally other than mature and maybe apathetic? Like its so mind numbing.
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One of the best HP novels I have read so far, nice original story and cool protagonist. I highly recommend if you are looking for something with action and a little cozy vibe ;D
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I was not expecting this to be as good as it is. Good writing, good pacing, and some cliches (not too bad though). All in all, a pretty solid start. I read all 200-ish chapters in 3 hours and can safely say that I am hooked.
Regarding romance, the MC hasn't confirmed anything as of ch 213, but as readers, it's fairly clear to see which of the girls has the hots for him. I have no problem with this being a harem, I just want to see it done properly.
The MC is smart, ruthless, and efficient. He is somewhat dense at times although that seems like him acting oblivious. He does divulge his secret pretty early on to some people (no spoilers) and it was done quite satisfactorily.
Looking forward to see where the author takes this.
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I'm really impressed with the quality of this story. One of the best Potter fics around, altho it doesn't say much since most of them are in my opinion lacking. The protagonist is interesting, his story expanded, his motivation explained. The plot is slightly altered so it is less predictable and more exciting, but those differences are nicely explained. Pacing is good, action scenes and magic duels are a bit scarce, but when they happen they are solid. I personally like the overall hearthwarming tone of the story, despite Harry being a bit cold and ruthless. There are ocasionall typos, but it is acceptable, it is free online fic afterall.
My only critique is the lenght of chapters, I much prefer longer chapters, even with less frequent uploads. But there is a decent amount of story here already, let's hope for it to continue
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Its an interesting idea but the author uses every cliche trope in existence so this story can only be average at best. Harry is just a side character at this point. He's hiding his abilities, acting dumber, weaker, all the boring stuff you can get from cliche tropes. Characters make really dumb actions to force the story in a certain direction. At this point harry has no point to exist at least not yet and 30 chapters in nothing has been impressive, im still waiting to be dazzled or impressed but im starting to doubt that'll happen.
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Honestly surprised at how good this fic is. It's quite enjoyable. Harry in this story isn't a wet blanket and will deal with enemies harshly when antagonised. The setting of this story is in depth and well explored. Overall a fun read, if you are not looking for much romance as it is quite limited as of the latest chapter at the time of this review (229).
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Grammar is not the best. Its legible though.
Plot is Mid
Characterization though is.. Not great.. Like
Lily Potter is nerfed pretty hard, whether it be in intelligence or combat capabilities she is just not there. She lost to 5 fresh Hogwart graduates while only stupefying 1. She overreacts to common knowledge things she knows and acts like a general ret*rd. Like she's got Ron levels of tact. Its sad to see.
Then there's MC himself. He comes from a dark future, war-torn and ravaged timeline. Dies and is transmigrated to an alternate young version of himself. Other than saying he cares about his family, and some minor interactions with youngest sister, he's so detached and apathetic. Like he's got no character to him other than just feeling like a tired war vet.
This story is definitely overrated. By quite a bit. If you haven't read many fanfics, or are new to HP fanfics, then it's an interesting enough story. But it's not a good story. The only thing this story has going for it is the number of chapters available to binge. All in all, this is something to put at the very end of the back burner for when you've exhausted all the other stories you've wanted to read and got nothing else before looking for more.
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