The first chapter was written really well for a first person Novel. Most Novels these days don't write descriptively with good grammar—so this one is refreshing.

Introduction of the protagonist:

(10/10) this may seem like glazing, but I took a liking to her personality after reading the first chapter. I like to read a lot of things that I can paint a vivid picture of, and this is one of them. Her courageous defiance against her mother despite the circumstances was intriguing—not only that, but compared to certain other protagonists of other Novels that I've read.. Most became very dark and edgy.

I'm referring to a protagonist like Lith Verhen from Supreme Magus—who had a similar circumstance back on Earth before his reincarnation, he was also abused—and became a sociopath and a sadist/pathological liar against every single character in the Novel as a result, with little to no character development at all. 

It's just quite refreshing to see a genuinely emotionally resilient character who did not hold some sort of delusional vendetta against everything in reality despite her initial suffering. Now, one might say to read the other chapters—but you can notice a lot of things about a protagonist from the first chapter of a Novel if the writer is good, (which—in this case, the author of this Novel seems pretty good at writing) and so because of this first chapter that I've enjoyed, the Novel will receive five stars. 

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World Building: It is clear that author is doing  is following the set rules and events for their story, yet it is slow like real life like someone slowly painting a fictional World. So the world building is 7.8/10, the world building is there but there no school and etc to tell how and why these creatures like golden rabbits came to be maybe am rushing it.

Pacing is 9/10 for me, It feels like a walk outside of my village where I can take a break from hearing how my family does infighting.

Lewdness: Yeah, I think it borders on smut but not close enough. 6/10 since I saw other series animated and V.N along with others going further in terms of bordering smut or just smut outright.

Character Development: The lore and story of how each character is like watching a baby grow up. 6.5/10, there is room for more details once free but that's just me.

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