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Had a bit off a rough start but man from chapter 30 onwards this story is just fire!
MC is funny as hell and not
a virgin loser anymore
MC is a typical loser at the start, I connect with him somewhat apart from his extreme issues.
MC is also prone to getting manipulated by women at the start of the story but he quickly grows up and by arc 2 I really enjoy this character.
The side characters are not just 2D ants but somewhat fleshed out. The story combines different Worlds, the real world and a giant Fantasy Realm. It's fun to constantly travel between these worlds.
I like the system and even after nearly 50 chapters the stats are still low and kept in check. It feels like MC has to earn every single small thing. He is not OP unlike other protagonists.
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I cannot in good conscious let anyone waste their time on this without a warning.
I read this because I love the concept of terror infinity despite the sad execution and this is somehow worse.
Warnings:
-Main character does not improve in any meaningful way in 400 chapters. Despite encountering every psychological vector for change. Literally almost every single one.
-The romance is horrible. It is built on pity and unhealthy power dynamics, yes, every romance, the harem is simply terrible.
-The action is the best written part but it is so rare that it is not worth it. You spend 30 chapters on what can be summarized in two unimportant paragraphs.
- Don't be duped, this is a bad slice of life story with occasional fireworks.
Now for spoilers and harsh criticism
There's too many.
The main character simply deserves to lose, and this is not an argument on morality but an argument on luck.
We can all agree that the MC is a lazy submissive loser with little to no upsides besides plot armor and a sometimes admirable morality right? Now I have to ask is 10 luck plot armor... 10.... Now, how about 20 is that invincible plot armor worthy in a game that seemingly goes to the 100s?
Lets go through the worlds he visited, one piece, Luffy has irrefutable plot armor and yet he loses many times is scared and has to work for redemption, Naruto same deal except he loses so many times and his ending isn't even good, harry potter basically tortured his whole life in order to be a martyr.
Do you see my point. All of these characters work harder than the MC are MCs themselves and they still lose. Even in terror infinity the MC works harder for less.
Now we go to the MC of this story, everything he has is because of plot armor, the man improved on his first mission then said no more and became as flat as a board.
Despite encountering, romance, responsibility, war, trauma, death and even forced discipline, the man does not change therefore, he simply deserves to die for he is no longer a human but cardboard cutout.
Even worse than the MC are the side characters who puppet the MC. He makes little to no decisions, all his so called independence is doing the obvious or following the plot while doing the bare minimum. There is being submissive and there is being a doormat waste of oxygen.
Anyways side characters, worse offenders are the spider and Menchi.
The spider is supposed to be comedic relief but the author does not understand comedy at all (no setup no punchline, no subverting expectation, not even shock value comedy or physical comedy), she is supposed to be cute but comes off as entitled, spoiled and annoying. Characters like that, in better works, are deployed sparingly as an enemy, not as the MCs deficient brain, or sparingly with a tragic backstory, anything to invoke sympathy for obvious antisocial behavior.
Menchi is not a character, she is a cook caricature who refuses to grow or change. So many chapters are just insufferable to read due to the trifecta of flat characters.
Romance, I can't even talk about this without insulting the author so I won't.
I'll just say it is horrible and inhuman and shut up. As for the concept, the author adds the ability to revisit worlds, the only reason that would be entertaining is to revisit old characters, but in 400 chapters I slogged through this has not been used correctly.
He also butchers the concept by having such an inconsistent tone that it is comedic. It's a death game that is treated as a romcom, the stakes are death of his harem, yet he does not work hard at all, and complains constantly. It is unbearable.
I almost hate you author for wasting what could have been great.
Summary: Flat characters, boring padded word count, romance is so unrealistic that it implies mind control, nonexistent themes and tone.
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i am all about the freedom to love and to be what you want to become, but going for a goblin is a line I cannot cross, heck a spider was as wild as I could take.
though thats besides the point, at the beginning this novel has the charm of world hopping missions, as it progressed it lost or expanded to point such as smut, masochism, and “slavery”. I cannot accept such a progression for love or trust in luck, it is just beyond me or what I initially thought the character would become, now he is a simp with incredible luck and intuition.
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This story started off pretty generic but improved drastically.
The first arc was a bit boring, the chapters a bit short but it was kinda interesting. Starting from chapter 26 the story takes a great turn. The main character has interesting skills, nothing generic but a skill based off conjuration. His ability is somewhat like a Nen abilities where he steals the abilities of others like Chrollo from HXH.
I am interested in what happens if the main character fights against Chrollo at some point. That would be a cool fight. Overall this is a great story.
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This fanfic is a very good and well thought out story. The way it combines original plots with plots from other works is masterfully done. And has very good consistency and grammar. All of that combined with the daily uploads has put this story close to the top of my ratings.
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Interesting story so far, good grammar, characters are well written, and so far the plot has been great.
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I just registered for this story. My English is not very good sry for this. I like this kind of story the most but please autor focus more on games. My fav game is Mass Effect! I need more good Mass Effect Stories. Please make a Noveria or Ferros mission and also make the MC visit the Citadel!!! Can you also include Liara Miranda and Fem Shepard?
The rest of the story is quite good. I liked ff9 when I played it years ago. Funny game good job.
Please keep up the good work! I will keep reading this story I hope you do not disappoint us by dropping it!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!! THIS HAS POTENTIAL
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The story overuses internal monologue to explain exactly what the characters are thinking and feeling, often multiple times within a single paragraph. While some telling is fine, this much explanation slows the pacing and makes the emotions feel forced rather than natural. More dialogue and subtle actions would help bring the characters to life and make their thoughts feel more organic and the damage mechanic is ass I hate it
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It is a fun read I am enjoying the new take on fantasy world the MC isn’t just a weird side character that is following the original plot of the manga/books so you get to have an original take on well loved stories.
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A great novel with great potential to be one of the best novels I've ever read
With excellent grammar and well-written characters and with elements of The Ultimate Evolution, this is off to a good start.
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