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I will continue to read the story since I enjoy the genre. Well my opinion so far is that the author doesn't know to make character be themselves. Starting with MC hes so stupid that he's the dumbest character so far in story. He in the hell goes to inn accepting that they will give food for free. Only to check that he has money yet flashes to everyone to see to cause a plot. Even idiots know not flash thier bling. Dont let me start with court scene that will kill me and his age of 36 might as well be 6 year old. Potential lover we don't know her reasoning why she into the MC and seem forced. Cat girl I will passed since we know thier history. Let talk about plot it forced and doesn't make sense or follow the character. Like robber it the MC for flashing and that lead to plot progression but it should have had not occur considering that even children know you cant buy food when you dont even have money less when you dont if ypu have money or the value. It forced and bullsh!t.
Style : it passed
Grammer: didnt notice any problems
Plot: forced
Character : terrible
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I've read through book 1 & 2 on Royal Road and can safely say this is honestly one of the best litrpg-esque novels I've ever had the pleasure of reading. PuppyChow's worldbuilding and character development are absolutely perfect and constantly leaves you with wanting more at the end of each chapter (even if he did leave it on a cliffhanger at the end of book 2! ≫.>)
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