Tim Weber's life is a solo grind: coding for cutthroat hedge funds from his tricked-out van, chasing adrenaline on isolated mountain bike trails, and dodging human connection like they're potholes. But when a brutal crash leaves him broken in the Oregon wilderness, a mysterious woman offers him a second chance - one that flips his world upside down in ways he never imagined.
Waking up in a body that's anything but his own, Tim grapples with curves that turn heads, sensations that ignite fire, and a fresh start that demands embracing the chaos of desire, vulnerability, and maybe even love.
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The story is a little lagging if I compare it to your other books, if I am beeing honest. I figure you know where the problem lies since I and a lot of other people gave feedback on that. About the characters. They are okay, not badly written but also kind of missing the special quirks (besides beeing poly) that makes them unique. Also I feel like the ending was a little bit sudden, but maybe this could be fixed with another epilogue like you said you were thinking about. Overall I had fun with the story, but like I said, imo your other storys are stronger, I guess you improved over the years.
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