Grammar is readable, but I think that you are trying way too hard to make this antagonist the Eugeo of your supposed protagonist in the eroge and a bit much on his power scale, so much so that it is blatent that the character is just there for the current protag's taking.
As for your thirty year old guy who got isekaied... I feel like you are hitting way too close to home.
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Grammar is readable, but I think that you are trying way too hard to make this antagonist the Eugeo of your supposed protagonist in the eroge and a bit much on his power scale, so much so that it is blatent that the character is just there for the current protag's taking.
As for your thirty year old guy who got isekaied... I feel like you are hitting way too close to home.
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