The Vixen Boss
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4.6 (7 ratings)
Synopsis
Trevor hated his life,main reason being that he was transgender.Yes you heard right,Trevor is male on the outside but female on the inside.Now imagine that one day people get superpowers aaannnnndddd Trevor is one of them.Now that he has what he wants and more he thinks it is about time he shows the world what he truly is.Oh did i forget to mention that Trevor is blind? No ok then.
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ActionAdultAdventureEcchiFantasyGender BenderGirls LoveRomanceSlice of Life- ThunderstruckJan 29, 2021
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Hiatus - Updated Jan 29, 2021
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It's not just bad, it's really bad.
The prose is not good, to say the least. Dialog is very unnatural. Our protagonist is meant to be transgender male to female, but is consistently referred to as "Trevor" and the writing uses male pronouns. (The author of this tries to justify it but it's still pretty insensitive)
The third person, present tense narration (Third person narration is generally meant to be past tense.) is oftentimes illogical, inserting random comments that make no sense at all like how they're gonna rant about how foxes are better than dogs??
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