The Vixen Boss
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4.6 (7 ratings)
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It's not just bad, it's really bad.
The prose is not good, to say the least. Dialog is very unnatural. Our protagonist is meant to be transgender male to female, but is consistently referred to as "Trevor" and the writing uses male pronouns. (The author of this tries to justify it but it's still pretty insensitive)
The third person, present tense narration (Third person narration is generally meant to be past tense.) is oftentimes illogical, inserting random comments that make no sense at all like how they're gonna rant about how foxes are better than dogs??
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