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This version is finished. Until I start rewriting it from scratch you may enjoy what is in here.
Erwin is an ex-army officer who found himself in a snowy forest.
At first, he thought he came here because of something he drank while hanging with his friends, but later a strange Voice, which calls itself Guideline, reached Erwin.
Without knowing its purpose or why he is in a different world, he tries to survive, improve and learn.
As he progressed forward. Erwin learned he was supposed to be the Lich King, a villain destined to be defeated by heroes, but because of a conflict that happened between gods, he isn't affected by a curse which supposed to turn him into a monster with no self-control.
With a broken guideline and some powers of The Lich King he is supposed to be, Erwin will rise from a nothing trying to survive in a snowy forest to a conqueror who will turn God's precious playground into his.
- Extra Chapter: Dwarven King On A Mission pt1.Mar 27, 2022
- Chapter 62: A Small Talk and A Mysterious PersonMar 15, 2022
- Chapter 61: A Three Man MissionMar 10, 2022
- Chapter 60: Possible Alliance and Future War PlansMar 2, 2022
- Chapter 59: Exiled AlchemistMar 1, 2022
- Chapter 58: My PathJan 8, 2022
- Chapter 57: Chosen Champion Of The GoddesJan 6, 2022
- Chapter 56: I Am The Lich King Remember ThatJan 5, 2022
- Chapter 55: Infiltrating Enemy FortressJan 1, 2022
- Chapter 54: To Save a FriendDec 31, 2021
- Extra Chapter: Farming and Forging.Dec 31, 2021
- Chapter 53.2: Counter AttackDec 23, 2021
- Chapter 53: The Counter AttackDec 13, 2021
- Chapter 52: First weapon experiment.Dec 12, 2021
- Chapter 51: Enemy on Our GatesDec 9, 2021
- Content Warning
All Rights Reserved- Completed
- 192 reading
- 33 plan to read
- 7 completed
- 3 paused
- 19 dropped
the story is I interesting and intriguing, however, I had to drop it by chapter 7 because both the sentence structure and the grammar are very bad. I advice a complete rewrite, not just to fix the many grammatical mistakes but to build the story back from the ground up with a readable structure because as it is now, it looks like the work of someone that just started learning english for a few days.
I give it a 2/5 that can become a solid 4/5 if it got a good rewrite.
(Sorry if my review sounds offensive, disheartening and/ or belittling)
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