First two chapters are great and show alot of thought went into writing them...
The next two ruin everything the first two built upon and instead are a fast paced messed that skips over and trampled upon any possible plot lines the first chapters establish
Probably too early to comment, but the setting is a nice take on the isekai genre (two-way transfer) with what I hope to be kingdom-building.
The prologue itself is well done for a possible new author. Not certain about most of those genres and tags tho. The majority of them haven't come into play yet.
First two chapters are great and show alot of thought went into writing them...
The next two ruin everything the first two built upon and instead are a fast paced messed that skips over and trampled upon any possible plot lines the first chapters establish
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Probably too early to comment, but the setting is a nice take on the isekai genre (two-way transfer) with what I hope to be kingdom-building.
The prologue itself is well done for a possible new author. Not certain about most of those genres and tags tho. The majority of them haven't come into play yet.
Keeping an eye on this one.
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