well I'll just say that I only read the first and second chapters a while ago, I gave it a drop because personally I do not like that extremely arrogant and narcissistic personality that is not to my liking.
That would be in my opinion, I do not want to sound bad or super destructive with your novel since I know enough that it is not easy to write one, I just wanted to give my opinion since I saw that you are rewriting it and maybe it was better for your novel.
The last thing would be that you think well how you are going to do the personality of the protagonist or if you leave it similar to how it was before, make it clear in the synopsis to have an idea of what the readers are going to find in the face of the novel.
I hope it serves as a tip from a simple stranger from interner xD.
P.S.
This opinion is written from google translator xD.
well I'll just say that I only read the first and second chapters a while ago, I gave it a drop because personally I do not like that extremely arrogant and narcissistic personality that is not to my liking.
That would be in my opinion, I do not want to sound bad or super destructive with your novel since I know enough that it is not easy to write one, I just wanted to give my opinion since I saw that you are rewriting it and maybe it was better for your novel.
The last thing would be that you think well how you are going to do the personality of the protagonist or if you leave it similar to how it was before, make it clear in the synopsis to have an idea of what the readers are going to find in the face of the novel.
I hope it serves as a tip from a simple stranger from interner xD.
P.S.
This opinion is written from google translator xD.
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it was good story exept the MC was too narcisict and jerk but still for simple op MC lovers its a good story
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