It's so good. The perspective changes are well done and in character. I'm never sure of if things are going according to plan or if everything is falling apart. I can't wait for more.

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Probably one of the best fanfics on this site, no kapp.

5/5 Would recommend.

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This a fun story, needs more love.

Not exactly something I would prefer. Just a bit too fast paced for me personally and this coming from someone who normally reads very large stories, so definitely more of a personal preference. Although I would definitely recommend to a younger audience or just someone who likes action.

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As I sit here listening to the beating heart of a machine I ponder, for the words have turned into gears, each space between the paragraphs allowing fluid movement, the button, that which oils this contraption in order for the next chapter to graze my mind, helps me to hear each click of this beautiful instrument.

A realization, I Have Seen A New Color...

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It has been a long f**king time since I have cried while reading a story...

This is one of, if not the best story I have read (both online and hard cover)

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I hope the author gets well soon 

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Longest prologue ever!! It was awesome!!

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A great blend of action and interaction. A great read.

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My GOD!!! I love this novel I cried so much though but it was wonderful I won’t spoil any just don’t think it’s a human mind it’s an A.I mind so it’s weird and pov jumpy cause he can switch bodies but wonderful novel 5/5

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Actually a good novel.

Sometimes characters - in my opinion :) - act out of character, but the author tries his best to make it believable.

Pacing is so-so.

Reads more often than not like a movie script with missing scene heading and stage direction, hence some people in the chapter comments said it was confusing following all the thoughts/dialogue/narration at times. I agree but I also like it.

Formatting - Ironic. He could save others from death, but not himself. - could be improved -> long blocks of text could be turned into smaller bite sized portions.

Few grammar and spelling mistakes.

Overall 4.3/5, would recommend since characters are not 1 dimensional and I like the Human and Machine dichotomy.

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A good story thus far. A certain amount of knowledge about the marvel universe would be advisable before reading this story.

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