A very entertaining Novel I read over two days and more than worth the small sum I paid for it on Smashwords. Even after finishing the main story I continued straight through the extra chapters despite their only relation being a shared universe.
Two things (kinda) I would criticize is how quickly certain parts of the novel went by and how the primary antagonist was dealt with.
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I would have liked a bit more detail on his plan's failure either on Blackwood or in court.
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Realistically, though, all relevant details were hit and anything more would be padding. I would still have preferred a bit more set-up and interaction between players.
So... Very fun, but the set-up and payoff, while still good, feel like they don't quite live up to their potential.
Tempting Transhumanist Fantasy.
A very entertaining Novel I read over two days and more than worth the small sum I paid for it on Smashwords. Even after finishing the main story I continued straight through the extra chapters despite their only relation being a shared universe.
Two things (kinda) I would criticize is how quickly certain parts of the novel went by and how the primary antagonist was dealt with.
I would have liked a bit more detail on his plan's failure either on Blackwood or in court.
So... Very fun, but the set-up and payoff, while still good, feel like they don't quite live up to their potential.
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