Total Views (All): | 8,386 |
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Total Views (Chapters): | 6,024 |
Average Views: | 126 |
Word Count: | 100,204 |
Average Words: | 2,088 |
Pages: | 365 |
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I like this story. The grammar is good. World building is good. Plot is fine. Even the action is okay. My only issue is the pacing and wording.
The pacing feels a bit too slow. The chapters a bit too wordy. Though that's more a personal preference type thing.
Otherwise it's a good read.
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