Luna Crimson, a Queen, Royalty of the highest caliber, a Battle Maiden unlike any other, there were no equal. Just like her name suggests, almost everything about her is 'Crimson', her hair, her eyes, but most importantly, the large amounts of blood rivers that she has seen. Now she lives a new life in a new world, but a new life doesn't transfer to a 'new' her, she stayed the same.
Blood-thirsty, narcissistic, and somebody who only cares for the people that she so chooses to care about, everybody else is of no concern to her, but she can also come off as childish at times, why that is? Only she knows... And only she'll ever know, for the sole reason she's living a new life is because of one certain moronic 'god', she'll never forget how he called himself 'Zeddicus' for she loathes him, to her he's not a 'God', just a poser, a jester.
And now, she walks in the world of wizards and witches, magic and spells, but even inside this magical world, there are people that are less special by default, just because they don't possess the ability and innate talent for the wonders of magic. Therefore they are kept out of it completely.
And because the Queen saw that the world which she now resides in is peaceful, or as 'peaceful' as a massive world can truly be, she decided to just have fun and do what any single thing that she so desires, after all, who's going to stop her? Absolutely nobody... And if they dare? Well, The Queen wouldn't mind going back to her roots and showing them what a feared Battle Maiden can do.
And so, the Queen walks the grounds of Hogwarts, doing just what she decided and what did she decide? That's right, doing whatever it is that she wants. And her primary 'want' is getting herself some wives and so The Queen aims to do that... And why not grab the whole school at the same time and become a Queen of Hogwarts, that could be an entertaining activity to do, right?
This story is a part of the 'Gods' Games' universe.
-Harry Potter and all of its content are owned by J.K.Rowling.
-The artwork was commissioned by me. The artist commissioned was @Chococustart.
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- Chapter 31Dec 26, 2022
- Chapter 30Oct 1, 2022
- Chapter 29Sep 10, 2022
- Chapter 28.Aug 8, 2022
- Update (Please read)Jul 22, 2022
- Chapter 27Jul 22, 2022
- Special Chapter 2501, part 4.Feb 9, 2022
- Special Chapter 2501, part 3.Feb 9, 2022
- Special Chapter 2501, part 2.Feb 9, 2022
- Special Chapter 2501, part 1.Feb 9, 2022
- Chapter 26Nov 17, 2021
- Chapter 25Nov 17, 2021
- Chapter 24Sep 15, 2021
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Wow this is cringe.
I thought the setting seemed interesting and I like the author's other series set in Frozen, but I had to stop reading this during her exposition on Veelas about half-way into chapter 1. For a character we're repeatedly told is literal royalty, she doesn't have even a shred of royal bearing or charisma.
Also, not that this author has a tendency to write character speech as entire walls of text using only commas which is incredibly painful to read. Not even broken into sentences, nevermind paragraphs with proper pacing and structure. This really doesn't help the supposed-queen's self-introductory speech to the entire hall of Hogwarts, Beaubaton, and Darmstrung students read like a drunken, incoherent ramble.
It starts off just pointing out how amazing she is and how she's a queen and needs several wives to spend her life with, but the really cringe bit is in regards to Fleur. How would singling her out, revealing that uncomfortable truth about Veela in front of everyone, and repeatedly reminding her of rape attempts in front of the entire school help MC form a loving relationship with her?
She just blabbers on about looking for wives almost incoherently and reveals intimate personal details about a potentially traumatised girl in front of everyone, and insults just about everyone for no reason.
Everything up until her speech was interesting, but then it just plummeted off a cliff.
What, exactly, are we supposed to find relatable or likeable about this character? What kind of psychopaths are you going to twist the original characters into, and what absurd illogical plot-armour bullsh*t are you going to use, to actually have a single person fall in love with this insane bit*h? I just can't see it, no matter how much I suspend my disbelief.
She just seems really weak and desperate for attention, that she has to make this sort of spectacle and take every possible opportunity to make sure everyone hears her repeat how amazing and better than everyone else she is.
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