The writing, plot and worldbuilding is so good in this novel I find myself skimming the smut chapters just so I can get back to the story. It is very rare a 200+ chapter story keeps me reading till the end, but this one did.

Some points:

• The writing handles the main character having multiple bodies really well. I never found myself confused about what's going on. 
• The author is very good at giving different characters their own distinct voices and personalities.
• The author is good at writing banter and humor between characters. 
• I really liked how the main character, originally from earth constantly makes references to earth culture and every time the surrounding characters point out how it makes no sense in their world. The reactions really help make the worldbuilding feel authentic. For the author: I would really like a few more conversations where Jadis discusses earth technology and the reactions of the the other characters and how the struggle to understand how it would work without magic. Was kind of glossed over. I feel like we're slowly going to get more of this with Sabina and her inventing.
• The worldbuilding is done very well, and avoids info dumping.
• The main character makes mistakes, and is punished for it. The main character isn't just failing upwards - she makes mistakes and people die because of it.
• The writing often loops back to something mentioned or encountered many chapters ago in a convincing way that just helps the entire world feel consistent and logically. It feels like the author has got a very solid grasp on their world and the writing shows.

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The synopsis don't do this novel justice, why?

Because behind this cliche intro is a creative story with a fun and enjoyable MC, can't wait to see more

10/10

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A Futa LitRPG with interesting world-building, well written smut and a consistently followed writing schedule.  Readers of works like "Dungeons and Dalliances" or "Rebirth From The Cosmos" will enjoy this.

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This story is quite creative with the main character's class and has almost no grammatical mistakes. That alone makes the series better than 90% of everything here. Add on to that the author can write both s*x scenes and fight scenes well and it's an easy 5 stars.

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Nothing at first glance does this story justice. It is an example of taking a tried and true template and using it to make an exceptionally good story. There are some portions where it feels like a wall of text for me, however, that just may be adult life and my lack of sleep catching up. I won't tell you if you'll like it or not, but I will tell you what to expect. 

First— the grammar. Is. Perfect. The story flows well and it is easy to follow the story as you go along (which says a lot, coming from someone with a severe lack of sleep and concentration). I don't recall any spelling or grammatical mistakes, which says a lot, because it means I rode the boat so smoothly I either didn't notice it or was too engrossed to care. There is also a good, conscientious use of those box/table/cell thingies to make the system and notifications pop out.

Second— the characters. Our main character is Jadis (Jey-Diss). She, for some reason, died, and we catch her in the rift between worlds, watching the cosmos and going insane from the utter scale of that which was not meant for mortal eyes, just there, until she wasn't. She then finds herself in a place that can only be described as the very essence of a living room facing a figure that can only be described as the very essence of an anthropomorphic figure. The god, D (Dee), explains that not only are gods and their respective afterlives real, and that in her disbelief of gods (or lack of anyone capable of proving otherwise), Jadis does not qualify to enter anygod's afterlife upon death, but that she, Jadis, is well and, well... dead. Which means back to cosmic existential crises. Unless— that is, Jadis can accomplish D's quest for her. D seeks chaos, a fresh change in a stalemate of a war on one of his worlds. In exchange, D offers, for one, to not throw Jadis back into the void, even better, he will make a new body for her, custom built according to her deepest, darkest desires. Should Jadis accomplish D's quest, Jadis will be given a second chance to live the life she's always wanted to live, on a world full of magic and adventure (and hot elves), plus, a sweet spot reserved for her in D's afterlife. Jadis, obviously, accepts, lest the story end right there, and is rickrolled by D in the middle of nowhere, leaving her to figure out how to survive the night— and the demon spawn of Samleos he courteously deigned to not inform Jadis about. From there, Jadis (plural) tries (emphasis on "tries") to understand her new system and skills, looking forward to the day she finds civilization, hot baths, and hotter elves. The love interests: 

Third— the plot. Yeah, just read above, it's already there lmao. The plot is understandable, and there are simple plot twists that you will either feel good seeing coming or be genuinely surprised when it hits. The progression is fine and doesn't leave you wondering what the heck is happening.

Finally— the world building! It's well thought out, and the world makes sense from the standpoint it's supposed to make sense from. Now for the real final point— the smut. 

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Def one of my favs. Perverted and fun a good mish mash of kinks. The best kinks in my eyes is the self s*x, futanari, and actually good grammar and story build up. 

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I am liking this story so far, it is enjoyable to read and I am excited to see where it goes from here.

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Highly enjoyable! Really great mix of action, humor, drama, sad, and smutty moments. I really enjoy the effect from the MC's first class on the story, which I've rarely seen done in stories, and is done well. The MC's 2nd class gives a great story motivation behind the smutty scenes (not that smutty scenes need to be integral to the story). Both classes combined provide a solid support as to why the MC has a harem and really help the smutty scenes avoid being repetitive. On top of that, you see interesting character development, and interesting interactions between the MC and their partners as well as between the partners. YMMV on the kinks, but if you're ok with the first 10 chapters or so I think you'll be good to go with the rest of it.

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This is one of my favorite stories on this site.  The world building, characters, and overall plot are all done well.

Jadis is hilarious to follow on her journey, and I can't wait to see what new discoveries, fights, or friends she finds along the way.

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Really interesting read so far, I can't wait for more chapters!

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