Well it started amazing until it collapsed into a cheap wish fulfillment story. The protagonist turned from a determined and somewhat likeable young man into a extremely horny big-brested bimbo elf in a matter of a day (just few chapters) It took the now slutty female elf just few hours since she first met a man to jump on him and  smash. As I said cheap wish fulfillment....

Not to mention that it took the MC few chapters to forget his resentment towards the elfs and goddess who had wronged him, to drop all his grudges and turn into obedient slime. Disgusting...

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when I was bored like five hours ago, I looked at the newest gender bender series as I normally do in the afternoon. I found this series and decided to read it. I soon realized it wasn't like other gender bender series.

while most gender bender simply put it there to be horny and have girl on girl action, this one wasn't afraid to make it known that it would happen slowly.

i found myself questioning the sanity of the author while reading as this is some weird body transformation stuff.

if you don't like that don't read. But if you're like me and find that enticing join the group. I rather like the slow drawl of the change that happens to the main character. Though, there is some horny smut bits in there. If you don't like that though, then leave.

this is getting to long so I'm gonna leave with pros and cons

pros: the author uses the gender bender parts of the story as a driving force rather than a trait to tack on.

cons: spelling mistakes and POV mistakes are everywhere in this story. Read if you don't mind that.

Edit: he fixed the spelling mistakes in the earlier chapters now. Very good.

Edit after the edit: the s*x scenes aren't the best in all honesty.

Edit after the edit after that edit: He's gotten better at writing smut.

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One if the best books I have ever read. I recomend it to anyone.

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So I'm giving this a two because I find the grammar and spelling of this story to be very bad. He at least once a chapter maybe more misspells a word or doesn't use the right word. Then there is his sentence structure of how he writes. It's not all that great either.  Like here's a great example:

Dalia smiled and nodded. "I understand, Alpha. Don't worry about me. But I couldn't help but notice that you seemed... Anger? Mad? Was there something that happened."His story is full of sentences like this that need corrections like so:

Dalia smiled and nodded. "I understand, Alpha. Don't worry about me. But I couldn't help but notice that you seem... Angry? Mad? I'm not sure. Did something happened?"

Next while I do love that he is putting story over the s*x scenes he lacks alot of  description of what is happening. For example:

The two girls look at each other and nod. They begin to move their hips as they start dancing. Rya watches the two women in awe. How does two women moving their hips inspire awe? This is also is suppose to be a dance because he calls them dancers in a previous sentence. Now like I said I do love that he is putting story over s*x scenes, he is also doing some world building which is also something I like to see in stories. I understand that this is his first story and he is trying, but it also reads like those that say also ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE. While an enjoyable story the grammar and sentence structure really detracts from it alot. This makes it very hard to not only enjoy but read. I will continue to try but may end up dropping if he continues to write like this. And just taking a peak at chapter  117 it very much looks like it does.

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Good story kinda binged it in one day and night.... My boss wont like that.

Story is captivating and interesting. More on the faster paced side of a story but enjoyable. 

Not that many and hard grammar mistakes (not that I can do better)  

Overall great to read 

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I just like it.

I think this novel is good for the start but I think in the futur chapter like around 50 or 100 it will start to cramble because the MC will become too stong and it will become later an eroge.

I would say good luck for creating the futur chapter because I personaly think the start is really good.

I will be waiting for the next chapter.

Edit: the MC won't be overpowered and it wont become a sort of eroge.

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So far I enjoyed most of it. I scipped some Chapters and the "Volume 0" which I would realy have enjoyed reading at the beginning,

So I would think the readers after me would enjoy the complete story wenn you either point out at the binning that there is also a prehistory to Quin. All you would have to do then is to make a note at the start and tell them it goes from Chapter XXX zu Chapter YYY. This way they are informed that there is more content to enjoy and can decide for them self if they want to read it before reading the main story. :)  

OR 

You could change the number of the Chapter. By that I mean you move the Volume 0 Chapters to the beginning. But since I never wrote a story my self I don't know how much work that would be. But as I said before in general I liked your way and how it went in general. I also liked that you marked the "spicy" content diffrent than most writer do in their storys by using the BONE ;).I guess there where some spelling mistakes BUT you pointed out that they will get corrected. So I just went over them after I got the warning.

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A good and fun story that feels limited in some ways.

"I Got Isekai'd, Well Shyt!" is a light-hearted and often comedic webnovel that is pretty enjoyable to read. The writing quality tends to be a bit hit or miss, but it's generally entertaining. An editing pass would have gone a long way, though. I don't like to criticize art too much when I actually am happy I read it, and I want to see more from this author!

Some things that I think could be improved:

• There are too many characters for me to really keep track of, and often the speed at which characters are introduced leaves me not paying very much attention to them. Tangentially related, the focus is fairly frequently on characters I don't care about.
• The plot motivations are... a little simple. There isn't a whole lot of character growth or meaningful introspection with our protagonist, who tends to be very straightforward. A gripe on my own part is that I dislike when gods or goddesses are available at a moment's notice to solve problems, but that at least doesn't happen often.
• Dialogue and commentary often seems a bit dry, I'm not really into "Cling! Clang!" as a description for sword-fighting, if you've run out of ideas at that point you could just advance time forward instead. I end up skimming sections like these (no offense). There is also a tendency to resort to describing the inner thoughts of characters, and - while this could be a stylistic choice - I think it would be better suited to implications.

What gets me to stick around are mostly the funny moments. Learning that our protagonist went from "straight man" to "straight woman" and was frustrated about it is really silly, had me burst out laughing trying to explain what was happening to friends. I live for this kind of stuff, cute gender-bent heroines being trounced by their own ego and realizing it in a moment of catharsis that lines up with the themes of the story so far... Well, this story doesn't have a lot of themes going on, at least that I'm aware of, but it's pretty funny!

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Honestly, I was pleasantly surprised by how good this was. The beginning with Hiro was kind of insufferable, since he was a delusional brat for a bit, but that was probably intended (and he even gets redeemed, so it’s not like it really matters in the end). Past that though, everything was really good. The romance is good, the characters are good, and the ? Is great. If there’s anything I could complain about besides minor grammatical errors, it’d be that Volume 3 probably shouldn’t be labeled as such. It’d make more sense to call it Volume 0 or something like that. 

tl;dr ?✖️2️⃣➕??☠️

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This novel is pretty good. I will definitely recommend it to anyone who likes gender-bender and is into straight relationships (what is pretty rare lol). But I think just normal fantasy+smut combo enjoyers will like this novel too.

There's a lot of positives about this novel, but I will cover the main ones:

- Characters are good. I usually don't like characters with saviour complex, but here it's done very nicely, I haven't felt any irritation I usually feel when MC tries to save everyone they see in a distress. In addition to this, characters feel alive, have distinct personalities.

- Pacing is good. Not perfect, but very good. I haven't felt bored or overwhelmed in this novel.

- This novel has proper introduction. Unlike your normal isekai where MC get's thrown in the middle of the plot immediately - here you have smooth transition.

However, I will cover some things I didn't liked. The main reason why not 5/5, because this rating is reserved for novels that have something outstanding. But here you will see pretty generic fantasy plot. Maybe the whole racism to MC thing is pretty unique, but it's a bit overfocused on IMO.

Smut scenes are too repetitive IMO. Yes, they're very hard to make non-repetitive, but at least you can make them shorter to reduce this feeling of repetitiveness.

The other problem is that power scaling is almost non-existent. Yes, it's not power fantasy and much closer to the generic OP from start MC, but here I can't feel the strength of the characters at all. Like I see that MC is strong, but how strong - I have no idea. The usual "rank" system that's usually used for understanding strength here is just a multiplier to strength, and the difference between those ranks is not clear in the first place.

Those downsides aren't that important to the main theme of novel, so it's not hard to ignore them.

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