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Edit: I wanted to give 3.9 stars, but the computer refused to collaborate
Good erotica (?), although it's more about the psychological eroticism of petplay and domination than outright s*x (only the last 2 chapters have s*xual action), the world building is a bit of a downside, because it has an established universe that it doesn't bother to REALLY explain, but still has a bit too many details to be considered irrelevant, so it may be confusing at times. Overall it has a familiar but fresh premise: beings who are superior to humans conquering humans is pretty common, but it's usually an "aggressive dominance" (even relating it to animal predatory relationships), while this story is more of a "maternal dominance", like, people don't usually try to hurt and humiliate their pets right? The aliens basically see even the most terrible of humans as impotent children who have to be conquered for their own good. If I had to change anything it would be the protagonist, not because she's badly written, but because she's a established submissive whose only reason to resist the aliens is doubting that her dreams could actually come true, I usually prefer the MC to be more conflicted, like, someone who's fiercely independent and is slowly domesticated without noticing, being conditioned into a compliant per
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