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Moves quite fast at the start and the relationships with characters are not built up, rather they are all given an event that locks them together, ie the MC saving their lives, and the relationship is established. Aside from that everything else is excellent though could of course be improved, character interactions can be funny when they want to be and there often is this jovial tone throughout, the writing is clear and concise. Main detractor for this story is the reason, the author knows to show not tell but they take this a little to far and don't show enough to justify the other actions they show. Overall a solid 4/5 novel I recommend you check out.
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