While the grammar needs a little work, the story is still easy to read and understand. So far, it's a slice of life story that is well written for a light read, in a sort of light novel format. While the start is generic, nothing stands out as bad, and the generic parts are done well enough to not be a demerit.
(DISCLAIMER!! : English is not my first language, and I am still learning. I used Grammarly to fix it. But in the end, it is not perfect.
A revised chapter end with (*)
You’ve been warned)
My name is Ari, A rich second g
While the grammar needs a little work, the story is still easy to read and understand. So far, it's a slice of life story that is well written for a light read, in a sort of light novel format. While the start is generic, nothing stands out as bad, and the generic parts are done well enough to not be a demerit.
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