By whitesculptor
Villainess and Grimoire is a dark fantasy story that follows the journey of a girl in a distinct world.
With the passing years, she dedicates her youth as a helper, hoping to become an adventurer like their parents once were.
A profess
The story feels very slice of lifeish. The pace is decent but it's more a short story so far and feels like a prelude to something bigger that could happen. It would be good for the later chapters to have more POV's as well to see it from their perspective and how funny the overall situation could be. I also cant wait to find out how the others are doing, definitely a great choice to remove a lot of them in the beginning for further minor and major plot points.
So far I havent seen any major grammatical errors as well. This definitely reads well compared to other stories on this website and wont take much of your time to give it a try.
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