My very first story. There's got to be a lot of mistakes that I can't see: confusing perspectives perhaps, punctuation? Since it's better to get outside perspective on things like these, I posted it here and other sites. So please don't hold back on your review/constructive criticisms if ever you have the time to read through it.
And I'm shameless enough to give a 5 star review because why not? :D
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.
I didn’t die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn’t get hit b
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My very first story. There's got to be a lot of mistakes that I can't see: confusing perspectives perhaps, punctuation? Since it's better to get outside perspective on things like these, I posted it here and other sites. So please don't hold back on your review/constructive criticisms if ever you have the time to read through it.
And I'm shameless enough to give a 5 star review because why not? :D
Otherwise, hope you enjoy!
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