Solid story so far would recommend, the grammar has problems for sure and your 1st/3rd person stuff is weird but its not that hard to follow regardless the interesting story makes up for it
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Thanks for reccomending its not a bad start but the grammar could be alot better dude
Solid story so far would recommend, the grammar has problems for sure and your 1st/3rd person stuff is weird but its not that hard to follow regardless the interesting story makes up for it
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Thanks for reccomending its not a bad start but the grammar could be alot better dude
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