Captured Fugitive Pete Ink is illegally sent into space against his will to take pictures and research on planets that have potential life. What he finds is nothing but shocking and truly horrific.
Solid story so far would recommend, the grammar has problems for sure and your 1st/3rd person stuff is weird but its not that hard to follow regardless the interesting story makes up for it
Solid story so far would recommend, the grammar has problems for sure and your 1st/3rd person stuff is weird but its not that hard to follow regardless the interesting story makes up for it
Read More
Thanks for reccomending its not a bad start but the grammar could be alot better dude
Read More