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The Immortal
The Immortal
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A story of a man who thought he had lost everything, only to be given a new chance with a particular caveat. Will he achieve his goals this time around? Will he bite off more than he can chew? Will he discover what he had tossed aside in his previous life? Find out when he is taken to a world quite unlike our own. An attempt at a slightly more serious and somber isekai cheat story.

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Genre
AdventureFantasyIsekaiSeinenTragedy
Tags
Dense Protagonist Determined Protagonist Immortals Male Protagonist Naive Protagonist Reincarnated into Another World
Table of Contents 126
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  1. 126: Easy DungeonDec 18, 2019
  2. 125: IntroductionsDec 17, 2019
  3. 124: Swept AlongDec 17, 2019
  4. 123: Lèse-majestéDec 16, 2019
  5. 122: Only One Left StandingDec 16, 2019
  6. 121: FinalsDec 16, 2019
  7. 120: CheatingDec 15, 2019
  8. 119: Cheers and JeersDec 15, 2019
  9. 118: HeelDec 15, 2019
  10. 117: AudienceDec 14, 2019
  11. 116: StadiumDec 14, 2019
  12. 115: CoifsDec 13, 2019
  13. 114: PlazaDec 13, 2019
  14. 113: CaravanDec 13, 2019
  15. 112: RachimovDec 13, 2019
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      ShadeByTheSea
      Status: 96: expedition

      It has fairly decent character development. You have a dumb and dense main character that seems try and be a decent person. This would normally be extremely annoying but the supporting characters are well done. 

      I binged read it till late into the night, than I rage quit the story. Than had trouble falling asleep, and continued reading. This I consider good writing, because it means I care about what happens.

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      The problem is that the story didn't have the tragedy tag that it now sports. I avoid anything with that tag or grimdark because I don't respond well emotionally to them. I had thought it was more a tragic past type story. 

      Sadly I can't enjoy the story as much anymore, mainly because I can't emotionally invest in the side characters. I expect them to disappear from the story at any moment. I can't enjoy their happy moments because there's always the impending doom on the horizon.

      This means I'm stuck in wanting to know what happens next, but expecting to become an emotional trainwreck when something happens.

      Once again, I consider this good writing, but it's not for everyone.

      Also I can only think the god the brought him to this world as a evil deity that has damned the MC to eternal suffering.

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