Total Views (All): | 976 |
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Total Views (Chapters): | 314 |
Average Views: | 21 |
Word Count: | 29,293 |
Average Words: | 1,953 |
Pages: | 107 |
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A nice to read story so far.
The grammar and spelling I don't dare judging as I am not an English native. The story itself though is beautifully written and really draws you into it's world.
The main character occasionally feels a little bland here and there, but I believe once we get to see more of him and his world, that might change drastically.
Altogether, I cannot help but recommending reading the story, it has a lot of potential and certainly gained a new reader in me.
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The writing alone is worth 5 stars.
The descriptions and the expression of language are extremely engaging, coupled with the intense events of the opening act keeps you right on the edge of the next page.
Though some criticisms might be that the singular motivation of the main protagonist is rather overdone and thus, can seem stereotypical. The sequences and story telling hooks you in but I can't say the same about the characters we are currently introduced to.
Nonetheless, I implore whoever is reading this review to give it a shot.
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