A Filipino man died in an illness during the latest pandemic and found himself transmigrated in a world of magic, in which he received a dinging sound in his ear.
[You have transmigrated in the body of: Nameless: abandoned newborn human
Abandoned what?
[God of Undead: ??? Have bestowed you his blessing by giving you the name [ Sophia Demiurge] ]
I'm a girl?
[You are now an official mortal child of a god.]
[Multiple Blessings have been bestowed upon you]
[Unique Skill: Guide Acquired
Unique Skill: Necromancy Acquired
Unique Skill: Hastened Human Evolution Acquired]
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Hey, how about someone explain the situation to me?
(Not an Overlord Fanfiction)
(Reviews will be greatly appreciated)
This is painful to read. I get that english is not the authors first language but the sentence structure and word order are so weird it makes it physically painful to read. I have read a lot of novels with better grammar and even MTL novels, but this is by far the most difficult one that I tried to go through.
I had to skip multiple paragraphs of text, skimming over them and getting the most important keywords just to try and read this novel.
And this doesn't help the fact that the protagonist if awful. She is proclaimed as some kind miraculous genius but behaves like a moron, with her genius being seen again and again in her self dialog where she praises herself to the f**king sun while the system bootlicks her for sometimes basic deduction and sometimes for "understanding" things that seem to not have any connection to the topic at hand
Maybe, the character is smart and I just can't understand it because of the awful language, but this is still the only novel I had to drop to date because I couldn't read it.
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Dont know why the other guy just gave it 1 star. The world is a bit on the later chapters the story is mostly focus more on actions of the MC, though for an MC who is considered a genius the part where she try to fight the wolf lead was stupid and the god who let her see it the hard way was a dumb move.
Second of its better than those mtl sh*t dont know why the one who gave it 1 star couldn't understand sh*t. I literally chinese translated novels and they were crappier than a dog's sh*t. Keep up the good work btw author, hope you wont get discouraged. Also hope MC goes to the harem route. Cant wait for more (though I didn't finish reading it)
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Do not read this story it, It has every single Mistake In it. For me to explain I would have to give
Like I said before I Edited This, The main character is a super special Genius That were supposed to feel bad for. But the author is focusing on how cool he is (Note I may have Assumed this but given the fact that It Starts off That the main character is an orphan And That his mom Committed suicide maybe, Doesn't really Mesh Well With All the praise the narration gives him)
And the necromancy Apparently that author wants to be special, There's nothing wrong with this though But if you're expecting zombies, Skeletons And other Undead You will be disappointed.
Onto the things that I absolutely hated, The main character's Mental monologues are Always filled with Pride And ego Which I understand that's their character But The author Doesn't even make them sound smart In fact it feels like I'm listening to captain obvious At some points. And at others the main character Assumes things to be the truth, But I will read this Again. I tell you if it gets better or worse
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