Side Note: Later chapters fall into a common failing of most Xianxia and Wuxia stories. They tell you something instead of showing it to you. You should never just tell your readers something is a certain way unless you are trying to write an academic paper. You have to show the readers what something is, otherwise it's just an uninteresting info dump that has no place in the story other than a bunch of words that they have to take on faith.

I'd give this four stars, but the grammar really hinders the word flow.

As mentioned before the word flow is hindered greatly by the grammar. You would get into a good rhythm only to stumble when suddenly you get to a few words that mean the exact same thing that are stringed together.

The story is nothing really new, but is done in a way that isn't too bad.

The writing starts really strong but falls into the usual lul caused by a rather mechanical MC that only reacts to the world instead of actually pursuing what he thinks about.

The grammar is where this really takes a beating. If not for the grammar this would almost be a standard Cultivation story minus the harem. I cannot stress how much a good proofreader and/or editor would patch this up.

Overall, not a bad read, but not exactly the best I've seen.

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Nusan_Walen

Status: meeting an old friend

Jul 23, 2020

this series is, at the beginning very good, but after they meet their main enemy it became hard to read. I know that author wanted to show us emotions and all, but honestly after that chapter I had trouble to continue. Maybe after some time I will return to read this rare book, but for now I will read something different.

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