Too much hype for an incredibly disappointing fanfic. There's almost no good points for this story. 

• Characters interactions: MC's playful personality is irritating he is like a discount version of Urahara Keisuke or Gojo Satoru. The way he talks feels so fake and pretentious. His acting is also so bad but for some reason it fool others which is dumb. MC is nothing special but the author made it look like the MC is some kind of Smartass and Cunning guy, it feels so forced. The dialogues and interactions between characters also feels fake and low quality. It reminds me that people probably only read this because it has R-18 and harem. 
• Tier Harribel's character is also disappointing here, from a canonically badass and cool character she became a side bit*h which only job is to worry about the MC like a useless damsel on the sidelines. 
• The worst part, the MC's system allow the MC to change his race. MC can basically change his race to Hollow, Human, Quincy, Shinigami etc. Which completely beats my reason to read this story. Imagine all the readers came here for a badass Hollow MC only for author to give MC power to change race like changing clothes. Wtf. It's so uncool and lame. 
• Oh right, the Action fights is long-winded and uninteresting I don't understand why make such long and uninteresting action fight, it's just water chapters. 

Some might complain that all I said was complain but you can't really blame me for not finding any worthwhile parts from the story. Just go try it yourself and find out. I'm dropping this. 

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It's pretty good. Though the author needs to work on dialogue as much of it feels forced or is just too easy. Even more so how other characters react to the MC. It gives everything a very artificial feel and regularly breaks me out of immersion.

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I would say, it's very good. I recommend everyone to read it. 

I like the author adding pictures in it.

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Legitimately makes me happy as well as makes my day when I see a new chapter

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(ch113)

I like it a lot :) I'll definitely read it till the final chapter :)

Edit: (ch.178) well it's still enjoyable, but the fact that he can switch his race on whim is little annoying.

3/5 is a good score for it: not bad, not great, nowhere near a masterpiece. It's simply a good story 

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The story is really good so far! However, there is one issue that stuck out to me. Well, that's more personal preference than anything, I guess. My first issue is that the MC has almost every female character in bleach fawning over him. Not to spoil too much, but as of writing this, he has 7 people in his harem:

He has 3 that are falling for him: And he has 4 more that he's actively pursuing!: And I'm pretty sure I'm missing a few too! At the rate things are going, it'll be a 14+ person harem! 

• Secondly, as of writing this, there isn't a single appearance of Ichigo and the gang.
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  Because this story takes place before Ichigo was born. Hell, It takes place before Isshin (Ichigo's dad) even meets Ichigo's mother!

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  And because of that, the story doesn't stick to the cannon timeline all too much. Which is a good or bad thing depending on who you're asking. Personally, I don't mind.
• Lastly, damn, are the heroines easy to woo!  They all fall for the MC so easily! The only one who doesn't just fall for the MC's voice hook, line, and sinker is Yoruichi. Which, consequently she's the character I'm rooting for the most.

• Now, gripes aside, the fighting scenes are badass, and the author was nice enough to add illustrations to help readers visualize characters and weapons. Despite the MC's flirty behavior, interactions rarely come off as cringe-worthy, though it does feel a tad forced since the MC tries to seduce anyone and everyone. I also remember reading a review saying the author butchered Tier's character.
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  The Tier in this novel definitely acts differently than the manga, but her character makes sense. In this story, the author decides to crank Tier's maternal instincts to the max since her hollow hole is positioned on her womb. The author goes into more detail in the novel, so read it to learn more.

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  Anyway, it's highly entertaining, and I would recommend it despite my b####ing.
• TL;DR: The harem is too big (14+ characters) and deviates from the original bleach, which I personally don't think is a bad thing. It's just something to note in case that's what you're expecting. The characters are written very well, and the interactions are equally as well written. Though, the characters do feel a bit too easy to woo. It also has illustrations, and the fights are badass, too! And Yoruichi best girl!

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So far the story has been an amazing read. The way the author conveys the changes in the actual bleach timeline and accurately portrays the time period and timeline of events are excellent. The characters have a semi-accurate semblance and accuracy to who they are, and with mostly convincing character development for the cast creates a lovable appeal for all of them. However, I do have some gripes with the story, the protagonist's perverted antics are a nice light comic relief but aren't entirely welcoming to developing the story with the harem and some forcing of it. But, harem aside, the story is a great bleach fanfiction and I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far, it has also inspired me to make an account and write fanfics here too.

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Personally its one of the best bleach fanfics ive read so far. The MC is likeable and isnt an asshole once he gets some power like most other fanfics. 

The bleach characters are well written and believable. The smut scenes are well done to the point I wish there was more. 

Easy 5/5 for me. Thank you for your work!

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