The story is engaging and very fulfilling, the chapters are on the medium side, the writing is neat and concise, and I think the novel is deserving of your time.

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This is one of the best written fanfics I’ve read in a while. It’s in my top 3 of all time.

I’ve only read about 30 chapters but I feel like the author has told me more about this world in that time than most other MHA fics do at their 200th chapter. The prose is so, so good it feels too good for this website. The whole feel of this story is much more seinen than shonen. Honestly I could go on and on with the praises but I’ll just say this; this story deserves all five of the stars I’ve given it. Read it.

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I would say it's disappointing, but I should have known better than to read an anti-hero tag story. Despite the cringe writing, chapter 0 gave me some hope that this was going to be decent. But both the MC and his eldest brother (Touya/Dabi) are terribly written. I'm surprised about the second thing, cause Dabi already had a much better backstory. Up here he's shown to be a sociopath from the beginning. I mean, the novel calls him a sociopath, but he acts much closer to a ret*rd than he does a sociopath.

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This was a absolute masterpiece, it was one of, if not the best fanfiction I've ever read,

there are occasionally some spelling errors but their pretty minor, it has 270ish chapters in it and their not super short either, I loved it because the MC has such emotional depth you can feel whats happening to him along the way, and it's just a amazing piece of work, It deserves more views than it gets and I take some pride in knowing at least here on this platform, Im one of two people who hearted the chapters till the end. :) Have a nice day and thank you for making this Nar_cisse!

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4.5 stars. i'll probably raise it at a later time.

the first few arcs are pretty slow but they mesh with the later ones so well. as a kid (toddler, child, preteen) the MC's mental state is all over the place and even when he's 15 (aka UA time). I mean the MC is just f**king batsh*t psycho crazy but like in a functional kind of way. ive rarely seen such f**ked up MC's that at this point im kinda worried about the author's mental health (not to say there isnt any wholesome moments cause there are but only with his dad so far)... but the character development is just... *mwah*, just beautiful really. I dont wanna spoil anything about this story so i'll just say this... if you have ADD (attention deficit disorder) then you will get bored of the story at times, mainly the beginning arcs (when hes growing up as a toddler and child) BUT if you stay with it then I think as long as you are into psycho crazy asshole MC's then you'll love it. oh and OP. MC is op but his high ass ego and caution nerfs him a bit which honestly I totally f**king understand cause if the MC wasnt nerfed in some way then he'd just be broken. not to mention ninja world powers in an MHA world is already broken as is.

anyway! read it, its good.

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A interesting, more realistic, story, but with few weird point and some thing that can be improved (such as a implication that Enji has Italian origine wich is fine but Todoroki IS NOT a Italian name). But we can't give 4.5 and I can't give a perfect score (but it's close). MC is a bit snobish, manipulator, but have few moment when you see his not a totaly bastard. Also he get setback, get trauma, get beaten up as he should since he's human and still a child.A good story but not for me, after 25 chapter I can't get hooked to continue. Still, it take me 25 to drop.

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