Very good. The story is interesting and the interactions between the character seem true. Thank you for your hard work

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The story is well written, the characters have their own flaws and their own goals to fulfil, they tend to be few but well fleshed out over time. Grammar is generally splendid (partially because the guys on royalroad pay a LOT of attention to it, and the author is open to changes). 

One thing I would like to mention, though is the way the author seems to present the world. Except the named characters, and general bits of the world that the protagonist stumbles upon. The world is not elaborated upon very much. Although in my opinion this suits the protagonist perfectly, this probably won't be for the people who prefer a vast and fleshed out world.

I mean, it's 258 chapters on royalroad and we have emptiness, one city, random places with monster encounters, bastions (only one of which explored, even in that you won't get much about the culture etc), and an estate. (Pretty much a city too, merchant, guards, places for the family members and the existence of benches in the city is really confirmed). Lacking in culture and worldbuilding but a fun experience overall.

It is slowly working on it, but tbh don't expect a Way of Kings type of worldbuilding, it is just not the author's style 

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The story is very promising, the MC has a good interaction with the others and each one seems to have their own characteristic, they don't just look like robots.

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