The person who gave this a 3 star review really confused me in how they described the story. In my POV, I read it as if the MC was a wimp, and the author made the MC more "emotional" just because they wanted to.

What I read instead: the MC starts of disoriented in their new circumstances. They've become an abomination that is quite possibly a God in nature, and they try to keep their human form and emotions to circumvent the nature of her new form of being an emotion-lacking-killing-machine whose only goal is to eat, kill, and live. Therefore = become a bit more emotional = stay a bit more human.

Furthermore, they are not a slime. Tentacle is a more apt description, albeit they could turn into puddle and whatnot.

On the note on the Mc's attachment to the Captain who shows up early in the story (the love interest), they don't simply become attached just cause. Their dynamic gave them good chemistry that made it entirely reasonable for it. Which is such a fun read, considering how smooth and subtle they flirt despite the circumstances.

When I first saw the title as a Warhammer fanfic, I was prepared for a convoluted story where the author just does whatever the fck they want and add elements from other fiction, but no. Its genuinely well written and each chapter goes by so quickly that I wish I had more to read. I dont know much about Warhammer lore and it's cannon story, but from what I could tell, the author tries their best to write is as plausibly as they can.

I would definitely recommend, especially if readers like GL with some good action and sorta OP MC

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Came here for a warhammer Monster MC but found a girl in warhammer with slime powers. 

It was good at first and I gave it a 5 stars but MC is being really dumb about how she wants a humanoid body even it affects her combat capabilities especially since she wants a female body which is subjectively weaker than male body. She even makes herself more beatifull with the cost of becoming more emotional. And she says it is a good thing because she doesnt wants to lose her emotions. 

Then, she gets attached to a random human captain and fights demons for them and baby sits them. All the while saying "i can abandon them if things get too bad" which we know it wont and even if it does, she wont leave them. 

But i'll give it a 3 stars because author is a great person. 

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Well written, good character development, overall a really nice fanfic. Love where it's going, excited for more. (May be biased since I love nids n necrons)

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One of the best novels I've read, a real gem unlike most of the fanfics which are harem or bullsh*t power fantesy

 now let's place our bets on who are the waifus I say the sisters of bat

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Up until now a really fun read. Didn't even notice english wasn't your first language. It's a story where I can't wait for the next chapter to upload. 

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Very fun read, the protag is a nice mix of insanity and morality that fits surprisingly well in the universe, and the supporting cast are all pretty fun too, especially the love interest, she's great. Its not often you can see 40k stories with a focus on actually fixing that damn mess of a universe, absolutely worth a read even if you only have casual or no knowledge of the lore. ❤️

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Really good read. Characters are fun, MC is enjoyable, and just overall very well written. 100% recommended!

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A very well written fanfic would recommend to those looking for a Warhammer fic.

Also it doesn't require much knowledge of Warhammer to understand the setting.   

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Fun read, well paced, smooth and foreshadowed charater growth, i've really enjoyed reading it so far, I am eagerly waiting for the next update

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TLDR: It’s a good fanfic I just happen to not like certain parts. I ramble a lot

I have been slowly losing love for this fanfic as I’ve been progressing through it, having it somewhat become a slog to get through it, I want to be fully caught up before I can give a justified review; however, my frustration didn’t allow me to do this hence my review.

 I’d first like to say that this fanfic is amazing, I’m giving it 4 stars because it might simply just be conflicting interests when it comes to fiction and others might enjoy it fully as I used to, if you’re into WarHammer or even if you’ve never heard of it before I still recommend reading it is a fairly entertaining story and is worth the time taken to at least give it a try.

I’d like to start with the good things before I get to the bad; the story itself is fairly well fleshed out and even if you are completely new to the WarHammer series as I was you won’t be too lost which is impressive considering the insanity that is WH lore. Next is the  grammar and spelling, there are very few mistakes throughout the story and if you do find any they don’t really distract you from the reading experience, being easily ignorable considering how sparse they are. What I liked the most about this story is the premise of it, an eldritch being taken over by a human soul set in the setting of WH40k. An extremely simple setting that allows for the author to come up with many different powers and ideas for the story to branch out to while still matching the setting it takes place in. I would go into more detail but I believe that going into it on your own is a great way to experience this for yourselves.

Now for bad, not at any fault from the author but simply to the frustration I felt while progressing through the story. It starts off great, a random girl reincarnated into the body of some tentacle being that the Emperor seemed to have used for something in the past, as she consumes a greater variety of life forms she becomes stronger and it is great to see her progress from just some nobody in the WH universe, the issue is that this story feels like it slowly changes from a survival/action fanfic in the setting of WH with romance on the side just to showcase the MC’s humanity into a romance with an action subplot that just so happens to take place in the WH universe. Almost everything revolves around her relationship with the love interest, changing  how she acts, what she does, and how she does it just to make her more “human” which is where I guess my frustration stems from. She isn’t human, and although it is repeatedly mentioned that she is anything but; she keeps trying to go back to her humanity. I’m not saying she has to be some genocidal chaos god who rules the galaxy with an iron fist it’s just so frustrating that she puts so much emphasis on her partner to the point she changes herself constantly to keep up with her wants. Like I said, may not be a problem to others just rubs me the wrong way of you will. Other than that can’t say too much without spoilers so if you can get past that kind of thing it’s a good fanfic.

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