sleep, wake up, eat 3 meals of the day, school, gaming, watching anime, and sleep late. The monotonous pattern had become his life ever since he left his parent's house to pursue his school life in Academy City. it wasn't the life he was dreaming of.
Ichiman was an ordinary middle school boy whose life give him a chance to become the first gemstone in his town, a level 2 esper.
all that happen when he was on his way to school, and somehow, in a dramatic accident, he got hit by a truck, and if wasn't for the weird regeneration ability that he discover he had, he would have been dead
This newfound ability granted him a scholarship to continue his education in Academy City, to develop his ability
however, his esper power seemed limited to level 2, leaving him disappointed in the repetition of his life.
but, just when he had resigned himself to the monotony, another accident incident emerged, promising to change his life once again.
For someone who only watched first season of railgun and index each, this story is incoherent without the assistant of wiki.
Alot of cannon characters being dropped into the story without context. You are expected to already know who they were and what are currently doing.
From many other fanfics I read, slow the plot progression down with drama slice of life and have interlude chapters of different perspective will greatly help.
It's also very obvious that there's conflict between "I want ruthless overpowered MC" and "I don't wanna killed off cannon casts". I mean, there is a way to pulled this off and made it felt natural and organic, but this story is not one of them. Maybe reduce random battle scence and more talking/diplomacy?
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All I can say is that this fanfiction is done extremely well. The adherence to the original, but also the differences between them, is immaculately done. The characters from the original act like they're supposed to and retain their personalities impressively well. And the main character has a position in the story and isn't shoehorned in, and everything just comes together to make sense. There’s some confusion in some parts but overall great it’s one of the best fan fictions I’ve ever read and I highly recommend it and to overlook the lacking tags or what you could say missing ones
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To aru is a really complex fiction, even though it is dragging a reputation as a random harem anime but the novel is different it's full of a complicated lore and worldbuilding, a lot of fanfic of to aru will just make it into a harem seeking OC but here the author have a good grasp on the to aru world such as the impact of his OC that accelarate world war III with his actions.
Author seems to know the first part of the novel a lot I can't wait to see if it will be the same thing for New testament part.
The fanfic is pretty well written though there seems to be some typo here and there it doesn't really affect the reading.
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Good stuff -IGN 11/10. Jokes aside, for a fan fic it is well written and is actually trying to be accurate to the source, unlike most fan fics that goes wild and out of character.
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