All I can say is that this fanfiction is done extremely well. The adherence to the original, but also the differences between them, is immaculately done. The characters from the original act like they're supposed to and retain their personalities impressively well. And the main character has a position in the story and isn't shoehorned in, and everything just comes together to make sense. There’s some confusion in some parts but overall great it’s one of the best fan fictions I’ve ever read and I highly recommend it and to overlook the lacking tags or what you could say missing ones
To aru is a really complex fiction, even though it is dragging a reputation as a random harem anime but the novel is different it's full of a complicated lore and worldbuilding, a lot of fanfic of to aru will just make it into a harem seeking OC but here the author have a good grasp on the to aru world such as the impact of his OC that accelarate world war III with his actions.
Author seems to know the first part of the novel a lot I can't wait to see if it will be the same thing for New testament part.
The fanfic is pretty well written though there seems to be some typo here and there it doesn't really affect the reading.
Good stuff -IGN 11/10. Jokes aside, for a fan fic it is well written and is actually trying to be accurate to the source, unlike most fan fics that goes wild and out of character.
For someone who only watched first season of railgun and index each, this story is incoherent without the assistant of wiki.
Alot of cannon characters being dropped into the story without context. You are expected to already know who they were and what are currently doing.
From many other fanfics I read, slow the plot progression down with drama slice of life and have interlude chapters of different perspective will greatly help.
It's also very obvious that there's conflict between "I want ruthless overpowered MC" and "I don't wanna killed off cannon casts". I mean, there is a way to pulled this off and made it felt natural and organic, but this story is not one of them. Maybe reduce random battle scence and more talking/diplomacy?
(DB) A ‘normal’ teenager was watching Mumei, until an ad popped on his screen, now trying to get rid of the ad ask ”Want to have an adventure?”
(A/N: Doing for fun, And this one turned one of my favorites to work on,
It’s a rewrite of Rehammer, which means the start is mostly the same with some small changes. Chapter 15 is the first fully new chapter of the book. though Chapter 14 has a large addition. You effectively can skip to that and not missing any
Aiden has been having nightmares. Dreams of painful sunlight and scales of deep blue, but somehow those dreams are still less painful than his reality. There’s something there, buried deep inside, begging to be let loose. Of course, none of
We associate many things with the word “time.”
When time comes we are born.
With time we learn new words, we grow.
Over time, we fall in love and give new life.
However, when our time is up we die.
I died
All I can say is that this fanfiction is done extremely well. The adherence to the original, but also the differences between them, is immaculately done. The characters from the original act like they're supposed to and retain their personalities impressively well. And the main character has a position in the story and isn't shoehorned in, and everything just comes together to make sense. There’s some confusion in some parts but overall great it’s one of the best fan fictions I’ve ever read and I highly recommend it and to overlook the lacking tags or what you could say missing ones
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To aru is a really complex fiction, even though it is dragging a reputation as a random harem anime but the novel is different it's full of a complicated lore and worldbuilding, a lot of fanfic of to aru will just make it into a harem seeking OC but here the author have a good grasp on the to aru world such as the impact of his OC that accelarate world war III with his actions.
Author seems to know the first part of the novel a lot I can't wait to see if it will be the same thing for New testament part.
The fanfic is pretty well written though there seems to be some typo here and there it doesn't really affect the reading.
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Good stuff -IGN 11/10. Jokes aside, for a fan fic it is well written and is actually trying to be accurate to the source, unlike most fan fics that goes wild and out of character.
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For someone who only watched first season of railgun and index each, this story is incoherent without the assistant of wiki.
Alot of cannon characters being dropped into the story without context. You are expected to already know who they were and what are currently doing.
From many other fanfics I read, slow the plot progression down with drama slice of life and have interlude chapters of different perspective will greatly help.
It's also very obvious that there's conflict between "I want ruthless overpowered MC" and "I don't wanna killed off cannon casts". I mean, there is a way to pulled this off and made it felt natural and organic, but this story is not one of them. Maybe reduce random battle scence and more talking/diplomacy?
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