A overall good story and well written.  The grammar isn't perfect but solid.  The MC isn't one we have seen too often, and the cast with a mix of original and canon characters works well.  The main issue the story has is after about 20 chapters the pace almost entirely grinds to a halt. 

It doesn't suffer from numbers go up syndrome which is nice, but it may as well.  While it nice to have the MC not be instantly strong and need to genuinely work for his strength, there isn't much for him to do until he gets strong as his main focus is on the events in canon which involves captain level threats.

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