Cyrus was ready to party, only to be suddenly killed in a flash of light. Next thing he knows, he's being offered a deal by a suspicious god.
With a new body and some magic skills, he is to be reborn in a new world. The land is filled with dangerous monsters, mysterious rifts, and flashy magic. Given vague directions on where to go, he can only hope he survives long enough to figure out what to do.
And maybe, just maybe, achieve immortality in the process.
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Will be posting one a day (minimum) till I catch up to RR posts.
* This is a slow-to-start story. What that means is the MC will take a while to get his full powerset.
* The MC is mainly a summoner/spellblade(spellspear). A lot of interactions with his summons are involved and will usually be shown by italicized text.
* This story contains some swearing, not overly so but is liberal in its use.
* Most of the story is your typical adventure litrpg. There are moments where grimdark/gore/darker-themed scenes will be involved. Nothing that should require a warning label, but if needed, there will be one before the chapter starts.
* MC is bisexual. This does not mean there are a lot of sex scenes or romantic relations in the story. Simply put, the character has an attraction to men and women. If this turns you off, then perhaps the story isn't for you. (This is an Isekai fantasy, not a harem nor a romance slice-of-life. There will be no descriptive chapters solely for the purpose of sex. At most, you will get a brief fade to black if a scene ever comes along.)
Great story! Can't wait for more chapters to be released! Keep it up!
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Excellent slow burn! Needs moar eyeballs, and I hope we get a lot more chapters.
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Er, not sure why he stopped cross-posting here. but anyway...
This is a character-driven story with a plot that develops around the MC. It looks like at least some of the same things could have happened without him being there, but then they would have ended worse.
He's got goals, but they are general life goals, and the "get stronger/become immortal" goal is about living life fully, not an end unto itself. I like him, I like his "big sis" best friend, and most of the other cast. Even some of the jerks. :D
While not a Destined Chosen One, he *is* chosen to be given a chance, and to take a chance upon. Given some setup, but still the opportunity for failure. He makes plenty of mistakes, and is only OP relative to his tier/ranking. And even with his advantages, he's only slightly OP at first. Strong, but unskilled.
I do have to ding the author a little under grammar and style. The grammar is fairly straightforward, he has slightly higher-than-average typos IMO, and similar basic mistakes in punctuation. Nothing egregious, but they are there.
Similarly, the writing starts out a little, mm, stilted I think. There is a certain flow to narration that is lacking at first, but builds over time. He's been making edits to improve his earlier chapters, but they could use some polish.
I wish I could be more specific, but I don't know how to edit in a way that would help here. It's an overall impression, and I find it difficult to point at a specific thing.
But in the end, both of those are minor issues and I have enjoyed every moment of catching up to the current chapter.
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