IanWhite2105 was correct about one thing in his review, he only wrote it to be petty. I don't think he read the story at all and just wrote the review after reading the stories synopsis. I'll give my take on the review, again this is my opinion.

I personally don't think this story deserves such a low rating so I gave it 5 stars, at most I would normally give it a 4.4 and that's only for some things that I'll mention later on.

The good:

Regular updates. Good MC who has shocked me in solving things in creative ways that I didn't think of. Unique timeline that has enough difference to make you think you know where the story is heading but in fact you're wrong. Nice concepts and a nice vivid descriptions.

The bad:

This is what reduced the points for me but I don't believe it warrants too many because in the end of it all, this is a fanfiction and the author is writing several stories, so well done. Sometimes the author can get too descriptive in events, you can skip/skim it sometimes and not lose much. The story did start slow in the beginning just because of the overly description of some stuff but you can tell the author is getting better at toning it down towards the later chapters (i.e. 100+). This just seems like his writing style so if you like that kind of stuff, well start reading. Some minor writing errors but my brain, just like many of you, already automatically correct it/fill in the blanks.

Either way, 4.4 seems good to me and I can definitely see it getting better because the story is really kicking up at the 100+ chapters.

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I'm not even going to bother putting this in any of my folders so the star rating will be at the bottom. The only reason I bothered to lose a few brain cells and write a review was to be petty but my ranking will be objective as telling my honest thoughts on it seems to be petty enough. 

Very meh. There are a dozen other naruto/gamer system novels out there and although this one is not bad among them it still doesn't mean much. Being average in complete mediocrity and brainless smut doesn't mean it is close to good. The writer tried to do something with the Uchiha ruling the leaf but the execution of it is extremely flawed. There are about 5 divergence points that would make more sense but doing it at the point they chose was not a point where one would even think it should be. When adding an overplayed and extremely basic system setting on top of that you really don't have the recipe for a good work. I feel that if the writer chose to focus on one of the base concepts (and decides to not write only slightly less brainless smut) it would actually be not bad but again, the execution of said concept wasn't very good to begin with. It tries to do other sh*t to stand out from the 6 gamer/natuto smut pieces out there (probably more, I counted 6 different ones though) but ends up doing everything very mediocrely. 

Grammar is below average with frequent grammatical errors and a grade 5 level vocabulary. World building/setting are not good but not as brainless and mind rotting as some other fanfictions. Characters aren't quite in the basic archetype category but are also not very fleshed out. Only ten chapters so far so it could definitely get better but history (and the writers past works consisting of 4 other fan fictions) has shown that it will likely degrade in quality or keep to par at best. 

Edit: Only about 4-5 of those tags actually apply to this work. Just because it is going to have NSFW and smut parts doesn't mean that every NSFW tag applies to it. 

Overall rating is a solid 4/10. 

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