I, Asahi, was just a filthy rich young master who died?
But why I am following the plotline of a third rate novel? Why is this Goddess named Cliche?
And wait, this doesn't end there. I'm also getting this great system for fulfilling my fantasies.
Thus began my second life in a world filled with zombies?
Follow me as I conquer Milfs and Lolis through the great multiverse.
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Was pretty great in the beginning with nice character interactions and nice pacing, but sometime after ch 42 it feels more and more like a disjointed flow of consciousness and less like a structured story for every chapter. The harem members get less and less meaningful screen time and new girls are introduced before we even get to know the bare minimum of the old ones. Now we even have random time jumps between chapters and scenes and every decision is made at the drop of a hat with no foreshadowing or prior explanation of any kind. Just asspulls and new girls, like the worst of harem rom/com anime.
What can I say about this story? Is shallow, is juvenile, is also very entertaining if you don't take it too seriously
I love the not beta MC. I love his goal, I love his way of thinking but... I hate him for hating monster girls.
But I love the R-18 scenes too. I suggest you keep up in balancing the attention he grants to his beloved girl. That's all, I am out.
It's much as others have told you. He started off pretty good. The Beginning was interesting with good character interaction and development. Then he starts to make mistakes naratively and you see less and less of the characters he's developed. It becomes more about YA drama. I ended up dropping when there was a gross offscreen yaoi slave revenge fantasy chapter. It was like the protagonist had a personality shift. He could've just killed the guy, but he ordered that to happen. Pretty gross.
What can you expect? It's a Cliché Multiverse Story. A harem-seeking, power fantasy, where the MC is "Non-beta (ffs only losers use that term). It's pretty straight forward, not much writing technique can be observed so there aren't really any twists and turns that can drive the plot. Can't really say much since the only things that drive the story is Leveling and women. Still, it's easy to follow. Fight scenes are meh. Mostly brute force, and shoddy attempts. If you're curious about the power scaling, don't mind it, just enjoy the harem lol. Can't really complain much, can't praise much either. Overall, it's a very fun read. You don't need to think too much, so you won't hurt yourself lol.
Hot n kool (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Edit: I'm looking forward to a more intense plot and Hscenes author-sama.
P.S. It would be awesome if u can include the pregnancy tag in the story - I'm all for the SMUT with the MC's love interests getting impregnated with his seed during the lovemaking sessions! (They r well written so far)
This is actually a good one, surely I'll be reading 'till the last chapter. A good grammar plus a continuous story line without script holes, is all that make this fiction enjoyable.
Not a beta MC? This is my f**king story.
Umu... I looked away for 2 weeks and now Look at those damnnn updatess bruh. I already liked ur story when the first two chapters are posted XD
Solid 5/5 Every plot and cliche is written pretty well and most character is perfect. MC have a good humor and a personality, understanding his own harem and being liked by everyone. Looking for more chapter