A wish-fulfillment story that doesn't try to leave you in suspense about whether or not he can overcome any particular obstacle he comes across. The main focus is on him balancing all of the relationships he has with the girls while also solving the world's problems as best he can; sometimes while saving cute girls who would have otherwise wound up in a 'bad end' without his intervention.

As for the character portrayals, I honestly can't speak well of them since I don't know the sources very well. The girls are all relatively unique, at the very least. Can't say I actively dislike any of them. The only problem is that you might not see some characters very often, since they're off doing their own thing off-screen.

Technical problems would include some grammar flubs at moments, but nothing too bad.

If I could be more specific with my rating, it'd probably be a 3 1/2 star instead of a 4, but it's closer to a 4 than a 3 so... 4 it is.

Edit: I just realized that no matter how many times I change the star to 4, it just... doesn't stick. I have no idea why.

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Aeonir

Status: chapter 84: harem manager?

Sep 7, 2020

Was pretty great in the beginning with nice character interactions and nice pacing, but sometime after ch 42 it feels more and more like a disjointed flow of consciousness and less like a structured story for every chapter. The harem members get less and less meaningful screen time and new girls are introduced before we even get to know the bare minimum of the old ones. Now we even have random time jumps between chapters and scenes and every decision is made at the drop of a hat with no foreshadowing or prior explanation of any kind. Just asspulls and new girls, like the worst of harem rom/com anime.

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MasterHiatus

Status: chapter 78: back to tokonosu city

Aug 31, 2020

I love the not beta MC. I love his goal, I love his way of thinking but... I hate him for hating monster girls.

But I love the R-18 scenes too. I suggest you keep up in balancing the attention he grants to his beloved girl. That's all, I am out.

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renextronex

Status: chapter 96: geared up, charge!

Sep 22, 2020

What can I say about this story? Is shallow, is juvenile, is also very entertaining if you don't take it too seriously

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Ouroboros

Status: --

Aug 8, 2021

It's much as others have told you. He started off pretty good. The Beginning was interesting with good character interaction and development. Then he starts to make mistakes naratively and you see less and less of the characters he's developed. It becomes more about YA drama. I ended up dropping when there was a gross offscreen yaoi slave revenge fantasy chapter. It was like the protagonist had a personality shift. He could've just killed the guy, but he ordered that to happen. Pretty gross.

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tevey_tv

Status: c36

Jun 14, 2020

Hot n kool (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Edit: I'm looking forward to a more intense plot and Hscenes author-sama.

P.S. It would be awesome if u can include the pregnancy tag in the story - I'm all for the SMUT with the MC's love interests getting impregnated with his seed during the lovemaking sessions! (They r well written so far)

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cabbag3

Status: chapter 1: the loli goddess

Jun 15, 2022

What can you expect? It's a Cliché Multiverse Story. A harem-seeking, power fantasy, where the MC is "Non-beta (ffs only losers use that term). It's pretty straight forward, not much writing technique can be observed so there aren't really any twists and turns that can drive the plot. Can't really say much since the only things that drive the story is Leveling and women. Still, it's easy to follow. Fight scenes are meh. Mostly brute force, and shoddy attempts. If you're curious about the power scaling, don't mind it, just enjoy the harem lol. Can't really complain much, can't praise much either. Overall, it's a very fun read. You don't need to think too much, so you won't hurt yourself lol.

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Leiatx

Status: chapter 283: ouranos

Jun 24, 2021

This is actually a good one, surely I'll be reading 'till the last chapter. A good grammar plus a continuous story line without script holes, is all that make this fiction enjoyable.

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