Was pretty great in the beginning with nice character interactions and nice pacing, but sometime after ch 42 it feels more and more like a disjointed flow of consciousness and less like a structured story for every chapter. The harem members get less and less meaningful screen time and new girls are introduced before we even get to know the bare minimum of the old ones. Now we even have random time jumps between chapters and scenes and every decision is made at the drop of a hat with no foreshadowing or prior explanation of any kind. Just asspulls and new girls, like the worst of harem rom/com anime.

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I love the not beta MC. I love his goal, I love his way of thinking but... I hate him for hating monster girls.

But I love the R-18 scenes too. I suggest you keep up in balancing the attention he grants to his beloved girl. That's all, I am out.

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Hot n kool (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Edit: I'm looking forward to a more intense plot and Hscenes author-sama. 

P.S. It would be awesome if u can include the pregnancy tag in the story - I'm all for the SMUT with the MC's love interests getting impregnated with his seed during the lovemaking sessions! (They r well written so far)

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Not a beta MC? This is my f**king story. 

5/5

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Umu... I looked away for 2 weeks and now Look at those damnnn updatess bruh. I already liked ur story when the first two chapters are posted XD

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What can I say about this story? Is shallow, is juvenile, is also very entertaining if you don't take it too seriously

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Who could have thought! An author who can write without grammatical errors, or the use of incorrect words or syntax! Just for this alone I give this author 5 stars!

The story is setup in such a way that he has infinite possibilities. The story has smut, but it’s not obtrusive that it feels forced. This alone merits another 5 stars!

10/10 would read again!

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A solid 5 novel IMO, could use more chapters but that wouldn't be an issue if it wasn't good.

The main reason I think it deserves a 5 is because it's honest about what it's selling (Cliche, multiverse, harem and smut) and it delivers on all those fronts, borrowing popular fictional settings to as the main character teleports through the various worlds in the 'multiverse' gaining power and taking the highest quality women. 

The characters are pretty good, most of the women are memorable enough that even though there are (to date, like 12? 13? Including future interests) women, they are all distinct and memorable enough. The fantasy backdrop is rich enough that you want to see what abilities he will get and how he will deal with the big names of whatever world he shows up in. 

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Can we get a character info/intro chapter with stats and reference pictures 

Everytime a new character is introduced I have to leave the page to search and hopefully find said character. 

That's my only gripe but other then that the story is progressing at a steady pace with "plot" vs plot. 

World building is good enough to be believe it's a fan fic world. Well it's the first world at this time

Character development is pretty solid. Where the harem members and MC have a personality. 

I'm scared that the harem amount will keep increasing at the time it's at 11-13. Sometimes I forget whose who and what quirks make them special. 

There isn't a power creep or MC OP of OP. The mf has to work for what he wants... well not the women but that is what you get with this "type" of story

Also the chapters come out at a good pace like everyday to every other day. And the grammer spellcheck etc is pretty good.

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