first chat group fanfic that got so far in the storys  of the members

absolutely one of the better fanfics

solid and fun depiction of the many characters

regular updates (more than 150 chapter)

good balance between lemons and story

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a horny s*xual story

the story is basically the author praising the MC whenever he can and all the named and unnamed women going crazy over him and his "divine body" he gained in the gacha, when the author isn't describing all the women turning their heads to looking at the MC's face, body or d*ck which is so big that it appears even over clothes in some exaggerated hentai style, it is describing the size of the breasts and butts of every female character and how everyone goes crazy with them about they perfection, sensual aura and etc.

it's boring, the story is so self-centered on the MC's physical perfection that even the only girl in the chat (surprisingly, the members aren't all onahole women for the MC) gets a hyper buff to get hyper hot and gets hyper in love with the MC, even the first mission has a limit of two participants for the MC to go with her obviously, there is basically no story, it's a perfect pokewoman master with a d*ck that hits the moon enchanting every hole it sees, that's all.

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Author be like: My MC is so hot that I don’t even want to focus on the plot. The plot is people staring at my super hot MC everywhere he goes. Did your anime crush not end up with the protagonists? Don’t worry, they are probably in this novel for a couple paragraphs so that they can blush when they see the super hot MC. 

This has been the story for like 10 chapters now. It feels like the main plot is just not happening indefinitely until some arbitrary time the author decides he gets bored of the slice of life. Instead of a cross dimensional combat and leveling plot, we get literally the most boring plot I have ever seen; People stare at the MC while he goes to school and their faces turn red. Read that for a while and pray it gets better. Or don’t start reading at all. Ya that's probably the better choice.

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It was... difficult, getting past the first half of the story. Like the other reviews said, there was a lot of repetitive, over the top, praise for the MC, and I still find it annoying how every girl blushes at the sight of him. It's actually really annoying how frequently it was talked about. 

You could cut out 99% of the comments on the mc's 'beauty' and all the other women dropping their panties at the sight of him, and it would still be a bit much. 

Once you get past the first half, and go to Irregular at Magical High School world, it is slightly less extreme and there is actually a plot being followed, even if it is an almost carbon copy of the original, with the only difference being the MC and Aika. Even then, the MC is basically seducing all the fmc's (except Miyuki for obvious reasons) for his harem. 

I could feel my braincells dying in the process of reading this fiction. So, if you are looking for a good read, you may not want to read this fic. If you want to turn off your brain and read about a 'perfect' guy building his harem from several different worlds, with a few lemons, then you may just enjoy this. 

Though, keep in mind, the early (and middle) chapters are filled with inane 'MC is so handsome', 'he's so perfect' comments over and over again, to the point you may just stop reading (I had to stop a couple of times. It took serious dedication).

Overall, 3 stars. It's readable but nothing special and, as said before, it is often repetitive and inane.

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The reviews are a bit unfair so far, so I figured I'd give a bit of my opinion.

The novel's arc in Irregular from magic high is so far pretty balanced. The world is altered so that the main characters meet and become friends. It follows canon for the most part including confrontations. Dialog in those cases alternate between tatsuya and the OC. Never has the thunder been stolen really. Any deviation, like the side characters inexplicably falling for his adonis bod and 'gentle disposition' can easily mesh with tatsuya only having eyes for miyuki and his cold disposition. 

The harem element doesn't pick up until a little further along. So far only two members with one more pretty much confirmed with heavy blushing. The main couple has plenty of intimate moments already. She's also the one adding harem members. I don't want this to go polyamory but she's a massive pervert, like doujin and nosebleed bad.

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Overall 2 stars.

Writing quality is good.

The content is absolutely bad, chapter 4-19 is just pure filler with no story at all. It is just how handsome the MC is after getting a cheat, how much he makes women blush without intending, and how completely useless the MC is.

To be clear, the MC is not bad, but he does not act like a man, he doesn't behave like one or thinks like one. He acts like this ideal fantasy of unrealistic balance between horny but wants to respect all the women around him so he acts extra nice and somehow that translated into all the women loving him on top of how handsome he is, no relation to reality. He is so nice to all the women it feels extremely fake or he is far to feminine for a harem novel.

I was trying to get past all this stuff, you can easily just jump chapter 4 to 19, but 1. I am certain this will keep going. I don't want a guy that sleeps with each women but this guy does nothing.

2. I read a review\comment for this novel that guaranteed I will drop this at some point:

"its not even the MCs harem at this point but aikas at this point I honestly dropped it because of her like I was alright with her getting together with MC but she just straight gets more girls to join the "harem" so she can have them at that point I just left I didnt even mind the slow story and slice of life way it goes but this just ruined it for me tbh but its up to you."

It's not even the fact that another character basically creates the harem for him, its that the author used this pretty cheap, bland, stupid plot tool to somehow create a harem yet maintain a "pure" cute male MC. It's trash plot, trying to maintain an unbelievable story.

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This story has an interesting theme and premise, yet the writer unfortunately failed to maximize it. The story is exciting at first, but slowly it became a slog. To be honest, the writer is very dedicated, with long chapters, interesting start, and chat group fic is honestly one of my favorite. However, slowly I realize that my expectation for this is slowly being worn down by the pacing and some weird ticks that the author has. 

For example, in one chapter MC got perfect body that made him "soo very ultimately perfectly" handsome, and after that chapter, you will find this info repeated in the story. And by repeated I mean an explanation of it for a whole paragraph at least each time it is mentioned. I don't understand why he did that, and I'm not going to judge, but it really set a sense of monotone and "roll the eyes" moment to anyone who read it. 

Secondly, the pacing of the story is very slow. As of chapter 110, the MC and friends is still slogging around daily life in 2nd arc: Code Geass. Honestly I wouldn't have minded too much if the slice of life part is interesting. But these parts are actually very bland and plain to read. Many slice of life story really depends on excitements that happened in the MC's daily life, with comedy as a staple. Yet you wouldn't find any of it here except barren story progression and romance.

Third, and hopefully last, the actions, which are the most exciting part of this story, is very little. Yes, as of 110, I could only remember around 20 chapters at most that had the exciting part where action happens. This part is honestly why I keep coming back to read. But each time I returned, dry slice of life part really slapped me in the f*ing face and I hate it..

On the other hand, this story has a pretty fleshed out characters and the MC is also pretty likeable. Along the story he became some sort of pillar to his friends and family and as the story progresses you will see a bond that's growing between the MC and all of his chat group members. 

Anyway, keep in mind of these traits and if this kind of story is your cup of tea, then welcome aboard this pirate ship~

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Ugh. At first I think he would travel world, do mission with grup chat members like other chat group novels but HELL NO. Full of fillers, overpraise MC, various manga&anime compilation. I can't bear this sh*t anymore.

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The chapters are big, writing style is good, and setup is intresting.

Sadly, I fell prey to my expectations that it was going to be action, but twelve chapters after introduction and it is still all slice of life. Which is unfortunate as I cannot get myself to care about MC's school life, proficiency in basketball, or meager amounts he made in the stock market when he is already one of the wealthiest people on the planet. Especially when he has just been put in contact with multiple diffrent and cool universes that get mostly ignored in favor of school friend number 12.

If you want slice of life with a little magic in the background, this seems like a great story. If you are here for action and smut, you are going to have to read through a lot of very long chapters of school life.

That said, I think the MC is very likable and fun to read about. Just a shame that I feel the tags are a little off the mark (at least in the first 11 chapters)

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Slow paced stories are good but not this slow. I f this were some other author, story would already beyond 150 chapters for same number of words (too long for an arc). It has almost become like novel but fanfic MC became protagonist and novel MC became support character for current arc. MC is too passive. He has little to no say who joins his harem.

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