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Proof read this one along with like 9ish other people. It's very cute and sapphic, with clear language etc etc. Anyways everyone should give this a try. Also there are already a bunch of chaps so it won't just randomly stop being updated after a week.
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This novel has a strong beginning, evident from its first paragraphs, designed to intrigue the reader by using the initial point of contact with the work to raise questions that lead to the introduction of one of the main characters and their personality. Simultaneously, it develops the contextualization of the beginning and concludes by creating anticipation for the next chapter.
Regarding the characters, they function effectively within the context for which they exist and generally exhibit one or two striking characteristics, often used in comedic contexts or to create identification with them.
Structurally, the story has been building tension at the end of chapters as a way to generate interest in what happens next and resolves it at the beginning of the next chapter, maintaining a relaxing and sometimes slightly humorous pace
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For its premise of development through ignorance, it does an excellent job of developing tension, romance, and humor.
10/10 will read whenever the next chapter comes out.
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