It might be a good story, I don't know.  I tend to listen to my web novels while I go about doing other things and there is one terribly annoying thing the author does that I just can't be bothered to listen to any more.  The author has a bad habit of labeling every single sentence that was spoken out loud with the character speaking it.  It's almost insulting to the reader like I can't understand a simple back and forth between two characters.

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So, let me be the first to review this cause how dare no one else does. Paytoechip strikes us again with another wholesome and silly fluff fic that's enjoyable to read. If you've read "I was Betrayed then Reincarnated as a Kitsune" you already know what to expect albeit obviously a new story and a new protagonist. It's cute, it's fluffy, and it's wholesome. It's not a literary masterpiece to shake the ages, but it is a warm story that will leave you smiling. And sometimes that's all you need. 

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I'm not the best with words but Patyo's storytelling always brings a smile to my face so I am always looking forward to more chapters

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Mhm. It is interesting, but really similar to the author's previous novel. If you enjoyed that, you'll definitely enjoy this.

The pacing is solid. I love how the author doesn't really waste time with useless things, but still keeps up the character building with conversations during breakfast etc..

The characters are fun, and I can really feel the synergy between all of them. The comedy routine between all of them is an enjoyment to read and I can't get enough of it.

The world is based on Norse mythology. It's not a bad theme in any way, but we can just hope things go well with it.

The novel knows what it is, and isn't trying to hide it. It's a fluff story about a reincarnated kitsune girl enjoying life and kicking butt. It's not trying to build a complicated narrative or a deep story, at least it doesn't seem so. It is just simply a fun to read adventure about a gang of enjoyable characters.

The grammar is good even if there is some minor grammar mistakes.

It's a fun story but that's really about it for me. I'm not even coming to this expecting a deep masterpiece with complicated themes, just a peaceful story about people enjoying themselves. That's exactly what I got. 4.4/5.0

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As of writing this, I am all caught up to the main story.

This is a nice fluffy adventure of fated lovers. I like this novel even more than the author's first. He has a different writing style than I am used to with dialogue tags being parenthesis at the end. However, he developed it into his own.

There are cameos from the first adventure, so it's relevant to the review. But I like reading this novel more. The writing growth was nice to see, and it's not as much of one-note as the first story. There is fluff, yes, but the novel explores other concepts.

One of those concepts was trauma and how to move through it. It's not an instant recovery either. I can tell even up to this point certain ways that it effects Keeno's mood. I quite enjoy that problems aren't solved instantly.

Pros:

• Fluffy adventure with even more to it.
• Characters who are fun and unique in different ways.
• Fated love adventure where there's no question of who the MC will end up with. (If you enjoy that)

Cons:

• Some character perspective chapters can drag sometimes.
• I never really get the sense that Keeno will lose. (That's not a horrible thing, but failure isn't a big focus here.)
• If you are used to regular dialogue tags, this novel may not be up your alley. It's more closer to script dialogue. (No personal problem here.)

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well... I have read 77 chapters now, and im still waiting for the story to come into its own.

its really not a good sign when I look more forward to the interludes with characters from the other story in this universe, rather than the protagonist (s) doing things.

if you liked the last one, here is more of it, but dont expect anything "new".

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