By Beyltwinsauthors
Meet Nishimoto Rin, a young man just starting his dream job out of college. Graduating earlier than all his friends in high school and college, all his hard work has paid off. His first day at work is destined to change his world.
So far ive enjoyed the story a lot
The authors choice on how to introduce some key elements has been odd to me, but not bad
How the system works is also interesting and the science that's so advanced it may as well be magic is cool
One of the few books I've read that having multiple main characters doesn't feel like it bogs down the story
The story is good
I do feel like it's missing something
But idk what it is that can make it better
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Amazing story so far! Keep up you're doing great.
The nano concept is a bit hard to grasp though, but I still like how original you try to be and the characters are great!
Keep Freya alive for us please :D
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So a weird mix of sci-fi and magic ruining both.
At the start we have a scene that should be tension filled ruined by it being explained thereby sapping it of all its tension.
Then and I kid you not we skip all explanations about everything and go directly into fighting... We even skip his 1st lvl up!!! How is somebody supposed to be immersed in the story or interested in the characters when we know nothing about them/it.
This story is 70% fighting you. Go watch only the fighting parts of an action movie and you will have this story.
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