This fic is good, il start with that, I have my gripes with it but as long as you dont think TOOO hard you should have no problem enjoying the story so far, worth the read, rant time.

1st and main issue I have is the

, most of the stuff it dose in terms of power ups can just be explained by MC being a one piece mutant  or being a bio weapon or the child of a super soldier or litteraly anything else because onepiece is a world flooded by science bordering on being magic, actual real magic, and rediculously powerful races and mutant individuals, but beyond that its too convient, theres no opertunity for the mc's stuff to get stolen despite  it removes conflict that clould be interesting to read about and/or used to make the world feel alive, and the self repairing chuni outfit? Really? Onepiece has DRIP, pirates have DRIP, I understand that clothing being damaged is something that could be hard to write around but cmon man, give us some varity in the fit department because rn all I can picture is a please author im beggin, other than that as the system hasnt been explained yet I can only hope it will be retconed into dust or explained as some void century tech or smt, despite my whining this fic IS worth your time if you are looking for a onepiece fic you could certinly do much worse.

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